Manitree
What would happen if....22 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This poem/acrostic does what all good poetry should do and that is fully engage the readers imagination. This brought out fantastical and vivid images fore.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm super happy you like this one. It's an experiment trying on a new species, just for fun. I appreciate your kind review.And your great rating in your time most of all, thank you so much for this. And I really hope that you have the best holiday in your day is going grand!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very impressive acrostic poetry contest entry. The words you chose are perfect for creating vivid imagery in your readers minds. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a very impressive acrostic poetry contest entry. The words you chose are perfect for creating vivid imagery in your readers minds. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Coming from you, Barbara, that is the best compliment ever! I am just ecstatic that you like it! I'm considering a whole new world for the manitree. We'll see how it goes. Thank you once again for your kind review it.Awesome rating and your time.Most of all, and i'm still wishing you an awesome holiday and new year 😀
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, Lea, that's a truly explosive mutation! Love "the deviant soup" and the unstoppable force of this new creation as it terrorises nature, bursting forth in its new hybrid identity of man and tree - the Manitree. Well done on the acrostic element too. My only suggestion for the last line which doesn't really make sense is: Never doubt this transition of race, the birth of Manitree! Good luck, Lea! Warm wishes, Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Wow, Lea, that's a truly explosive mutation! Love "the deviant soup" and the unstoppable force of this new creation as it terrorises nature, bursting forth in its new hybrid identity of man and tree - the Manitree. Well done on the acrostic element too. My only suggestion for the last line which doesn't really make sense is: Never doubt this transition of race, the birth of Manitree! Good luck, Lea! Warm wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Debbie, I took your suggestion to heart, and I used a variation of the line you gave me, which tends to make things a little bit smoother, so great suggestion on your part. Thank you! So i'm glad that you like this.This is a little bit of a leap, but hey, it's turning out to be fun. Again, I thank you for your wisdom for your time and your great reading.May the force be with you!
Comment from nomi338
I do not believe I have ever seen a poem whose illustrations so perfectly match the words to a tee. Your words create a mental picture clearly articulated and then to see an illustration that makes perfect representation of what is written is in my mind, perfection. Bravo.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I do not believe I have ever seen a poem whose illustrations so perfectly match the words to a tee. Your words create a mental picture clearly articulated and then to see an illustration that makes perfect representation of what is written is in my mind, perfection. Bravo.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Wow! Thank you so much. I'm really pleased that you like this. Such wonderful words and the great, amazing rating to I am truly humbled to receive. Best of all. You liked it, so doubly pleased about that. I made the picture as well. Trying to hone the craft, if you will. I appreciate your kind words in your time truly.And I hope you have the most wonderful holiday ever.And you're having an amazing evening as well!
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I meant every word I wrote. I am truly amazed at your skill. I guess by now, I should never underestimate the skill of any and all of FanStory's writers.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, my friend reading reading, commenting all a wonderful thing of which I appreciate very much! And I too.Wish you the same for your holidays and hope the big guy makes it down your chimney with everything you wish and need! Thanks again have an awesome evening!
Comment from jaded831
If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi, thank you so much for your amazing review. Hi very much appreciate it! I'm very happy you stopped in to have a read to offer your kind comments and your great rating too! I hope you have the most amazing holiday and everything you I wish for comes to thanks again.Enjoy your evening!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Another poem about the Manitree, Lea.
This one an acrostic on mutation. It's a great piece of work.
Are we going to have a full series on this interesting creature?
Tim x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Another poem about the Manitree, Lea.
This one an acrostic on mutation. It's a great piece of work.
Are we going to have a full series on this interesting creature?
Tim x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Tim that's so crossed my mind! Very insightful, you are, and i'm so happy you'd like this! I'm pleased for your time and your review and your great rating.I appreciate it a lot. I hope the big guy in the red suit comes down. Your chimney and gives you everything you wish for ho.Ho ho and have a good night!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your inventive post about man and tree becoming one here, a very unusual word you have created here Lea.
(Undulating remains of life ooze a pestilent defense)
Suggestion here;
(Undulating remains of life's oozing pestilent defence)
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your inventive post about man and tree becoming one here, a very unusual word you have created here Lea.
(Undulating remains of life ooze a pestilent defense)
Suggestion here;
(Undulating remains of life's oozing pestilent defence)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you. I took your advice and went ahead and made that change. Thank you for that! Thank you for a great review, too. This palm goes with the first one called The Meld where the Manitree began. As always, I thank you for your kind review and the great suggestion and the awesome rating too.Hope you have an amazing night!
Comment from Gerard F Keogh
This one has fever and passion and certainly moves along like the best melodrama. It almost echoes Bradbury in a way, Nice Stretch of the imagination. Regards from Gerard
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This one has fever and passion and certainly moves along like the best melodrama. It almost echoes Bradbury in a way, Nice Stretch of the imagination. Regards from Gerard
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Gerard, so happy you liked it. This is an extension of the first poem that I wrote called The Meld. Thought it might be fun to carry on the concept for a little while. Maybe make a story out of this blind poetry who knows no I really appreciate you reading and offering your thoughts. I'm so very happy you liked it. That's the best and I appreciate your time too. I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great night!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
You. Never. Cease. To. Impress. Cool. Writing. And. Equally. Cool picture. To. Go. With. It. I. Enjoy. Reading. Your. Work. I. Look forward. To. Your. Next. Submission
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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You. Never. Cease. To. Impress. Cool. Writing. And. Equally. Cool picture. To. Go. With. It. I. Enjoy. Reading. Your. Work. I. Look forward. To. Your. Next. Submission
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Well, that's a kind compliment.Thank you very much.Thank you for the awesome reading.I mean, like, wow, i'm totally honored! Thanks too for your review and for your time. Most of all, appreciate it so much. I hope that you and yours have a wonderful holiday and that you're having a great night too. Thank you again!