We Are All Equal
My view in life.16 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
That is an admirable attitude. Also, Prayer is very important and always remember: Prayer changes things. Cherish your family while you have them. Have a Merry Christma!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
That is an admirable attitude. Also, Prayer is very important and always remember: Prayer changes things. Cherish your family while you have them. Have a Merry Christma!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you and Merry Christmas to you too!
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Thank you! And remember Christ is the reason for this Holiday!
Comment from evilynne
Your statement about your faith is touching. You have stated your beliefs briefly and to the point. It is important to treat everyone with respect and to share our love. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
Your statement about your faith is touching. You have stated your beliefs briefly and to the point. It is important to treat everyone with respect and to share our love. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a short, sincere paragraph that is a short story based on how you attend church and how your faith shapes your values. It is well-written. Your punctuation looks awesome, too, along with all the grammar. You use a variety of sentence formats. Good luck in that contest!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
This is a short, sincere paragraph that is a short story based on how you attend church and how your faith shapes your values. It is well-written. Your punctuation looks awesome, too, along with all the grammar. You use a variety of sentence formats. Good luck in that contest!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
Excellent. I am very proud in the noticeable change in your writing. It has become a lot more personal, showing a much more complex side of you that was visible before. To be quite honest with you, the way you wrote before was more childlike. Now you write like the adult you are. Fine work.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
Excellent. I am very proud in the noticeable change in your writing. It has become a lot more personal, showing a much more complex side of you that was visible before. To be quite honest with you, the way you wrote before was more childlike. Now you write like the adult you are. Fine work.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you! I am writing like an adult now. Thank you for your compliment!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is brief for the contest, Raul, but a sincere account in a nutshell of your upbringing, challenges and current motivation to live according to your deep-rooted faith. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
This is brief for the contest, Raul, but a sincere account in a nutshell of your upbringing, challenges and current motivation to live according to your deep-rooted faith. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you, my friend!
Comment from Douglas Goff
It sounds like you were raised to be an upstanding good young man.
Remember that we ALL endure hardships. Our character is defined by how we respond to them.
Merry Christmas, Raul
Douglas
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
It sounds like you were raised to be an upstanding good young man.
Remember that we ALL endure hardships. Our character is defined by how we respond to them.
Merry Christmas, Raul
Douglas
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you! Merry Christmas, Douglas!