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We Are All Equal

My view in life.

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Comment from jim vecchio
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That is an admirable attitude. Also, Prayer is very important and always remember: Prayer changes things. Cherish your family while you have them. Have a Merry Christma!

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thank you and Merry Christmas to you too!
reply by jim vecchio on 17-Dec-2024
    Thank you! And remember Christ is the reason for this Holiday!
Comment from evilynne
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Your statement about your faith is touching. You have stated your beliefs briefly and to the point. It is important to treat everyone with respect and to share our love. Best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a short, sincere paragraph that is a short story based on how you attend church and how your faith shapes your values. It is well-written. Your punctuation looks awesome, too, along with all the grammar. You use a variety of sentence formats. Good luck in that contest!

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
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Excellent. I am very proud in the noticeable change in your writing. It has become a lot more personal, showing a much more complex side of you that was visible before. To be quite honest with you, the way you wrote before was more childlike. Now you write like the adult you are. Fine work.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you! I am writing like an adult now. Thank you for your compliment!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is brief for the contest, Raul, but a sincere account in a nutshell of your upbringing, challenges and current motivation to live according to your deep-rooted faith. Well done and good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you, my friend!
Comment from Douglas Goff
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It sounds like you were raised to be an upstanding good young man.

Remember that we ALL endure hardships. Our character is defined by how we respond to them.

Merry Christmas, Raul
Douglas

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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you! Merry Christmas, Douglas!