Barefoot In The Rain
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aha! Does that mean the station man is out of the system now? Or do things go terribly wrong and suddenly station man comes to the rescue!!?? Lol. Sorry. This was a really good chapter, but I hope she takes care of her heart first and foremost. Well done, hope to read on soon. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Aha! Does that mean the station man is out of the system now? Or do things go terribly wrong and suddenly station man comes to the rescue!!?? Lol. Sorry. This was a really good chapter, but I hope she takes care of her heart first and foremost. Well done, hope to read on soon. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Now I am not going to reveal any secrets, especially about the station man....Sorry! Rachel pushed her friend out on the limb and she jumped, but did she have a soft landing or grab onto another branch? I'll figure it out and let you know...LOL right after I write it.
Smiles, Carol
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..."After I write it!!!!" ...😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Love you!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Ok now girl, this is getting mushy.
I am sure i have told you about that before.
I don't do mushy or romance so stop dragging me kicking and screaming into you r web
Looking forward tothe next day
Tim x
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Ok now girl, this is getting mushy.
I am sure i have told you about that before.
I don't do mushy or romance so stop dragging me kicking and screaming into you r web
Looking forward tothe next day
Tim x
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I'm trying not to be too mushy, Tim...I told you I don't do romance to well... I'll do my best to have a murder happen if anyone should try to kiss. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What an awesome chapter to your novella. It's coming along quite nicely. I'm still curious about the guy she met on the bus. I wonder if there will be a love connection.
Well done my friend I wouldn't expect anything different.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Carol,
What an awesome chapter to your novella. It's coming along quite nicely. I'm still curious about the guy she met on the bus. I wonder if there will be a love connection.
Well done my friend I wouldn't expect anything different.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Forgive my tardiness and my short reply...
Thank you and I love you!
Smile, Carol
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No need to apologize you are a busy lady. You're welcome my friend