Do You Believe In Monsters?
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Comment from Peter Jarvis
This chapter from *Do You Believe In Monsters?* is a harrowing and deeply moving account of childhood trauma and domestic violence. The narrative is powerful and evocative, shedding light on the profound impact of living in fear.
1. The story captures the intense emotions and psychological toll of living with an abusive stepfather. The vivid descriptions of fear, pain, and helplessness are heart-wrenching and compelling.
2. The autobiographical nature of the story adds a layer of authenticity and raw honesty. The personal experiences shared are both relatable and eye-opening, providing a genuine insight into the author's childhood.
3.The portrayal of Dean Paul as a monstrous figure is stark and effective. The contrast between his dismissive, abusive behaviour and the children's vulnerability highlights the severity of the situation.
4.The imagery used to describe the physical and emotional abuse is striking. Phrases like "pick us up and throw us against the wall" and "head pounding so hard that I literally just wanted to die" create a visceral impact on the reader.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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This chapter from *Do You Believe In Monsters?* is a harrowing and deeply moving account of childhood trauma and domestic violence. The narrative is powerful and evocative, shedding light on the profound impact of living in fear.
1. The story captures the intense emotions and psychological toll of living with an abusive stepfather. The vivid descriptions of fear, pain, and helplessness are heart-wrenching and compelling.
2. The autobiographical nature of the story adds a layer of authenticity and raw honesty. The personal experiences shared are both relatable and eye-opening, providing a genuine insight into the author's childhood.
3.The portrayal of Dean Paul as a monstrous figure is stark and effective. The contrast between his dismissive, abusive behaviour and the children's vulnerability highlights the severity of the situation.
4.The imagery used to describe the physical and emotional abuse is striking. Phrases like "pick us up and throw us against the wall" and "head pounding so hard that I literally just wanted to die" create a visceral impact on the reader.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Peter! What a warm and wonderful response.
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Take care
Comment from Wendy G
Dean Paul was a monster, and I suppose your mother stayed with him only because it was too difficult with all the young children to find another place very similar to my sister's story ("Life Changes")). I hope that by writing it you are able to come to terms with this abuse and hopefully may find a measure of peace. Well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Dean Paul was a monster, and I suppose your mother stayed with him only because it was too difficult with all the young children to find another place very similar to my sister's story ("Life Changes")). I hope that by writing it you are able to come to terms with this abuse and hopefully may find a measure of peace. Well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Leaving was a dangerous option. We ended up in a homeless shelter.
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Leaving was a dangerous option. We ended up hiding in a homeless shelter.