Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Super good writing here, Katie. Your metre and rhyme spot on and the cadence most appropriate for an enlightenment that came to you through the Christmas story.

I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Gloria for your lovely comments and stellar review! You put a smile on my face this morning.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Katie, you've beautifully narrated the Christmas story here in fluent and well rhymed verse which is a pleasure to read! I love the way the imagery of the walk opens out in the third stanza to the joyful sounds of singing praise for the Baby's birth. And your spirit and belief were ignited and resurrected. Well done and good luck! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Debbie. You're wonderful comments and review are much appreciated!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Debbie. You're wonderful comments and review are much appreciated!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and encouraging Christmas poem you have penned about the day you came alive. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Teri for your lovely comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Teri for your lovely comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nicely written Christmas poetry poem, one for the contest and I wish you the very best for the contest. May you have a wonderful day may you have a very merry Christmas and God bless you. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Patricia for reviewing. Have a Merry Christmas too!
Luv&stuff Katiemae1977

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Patricia for reviewing. Have a Merry Christmas too!
Luv&stuff Katiemae1977

Comment from Sergeant F. Dare

Excellent

Hallo there. Nicely written poetry, I like it. Were you writing about yourself when a baby?
I like this work a lot and think it needs six stars, but unfortunately I'm out of six stars. Have a lovely day!


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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review! Happy holidays to you!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977