Who'll Guide the Sleigh Tonight
What happened to Rudolph's nose?19 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a great story for Christmas. I'd say Mr. Jingles learned his lesson about taking something that does not belong to him.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Carol,
What a great story for Christmas. I'd say Mr. Jingles learned his lesson about taking something that does not belong to him.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I hope he got the lesson anyhow. I'm only 80 reviews behind...that's what I get for traveling, but it was worth it. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Of course everyone who has read your stories knows what a great storyteller you are Carolp , and this one would prove what a winner you are dear girl, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Of course everyone who has read your stories knows what a great storyteller you are Carolp , and this one would prove what a winner you are dear girl, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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You honor me with the "great storyteller" but I thank you so much for your kindness. I love to write and make others happy.... even my characters. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Elaanor is such a cleverly inspired character
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Thank you...I have fallen in love with my dear Eleanor.
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I think we all have Carol.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a delightful children's Christmas story with lessons to be learned. If I still taught preschool, I would have fun reading this story and watching young faces react to Rudolph's nose being removed and later shining bright as he led Santa's sleigh. Great story.
Sanat appeared at Jingle's door (Santa)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a delightful children's Christmas story with lessons to be learned. If I still taught preschool, I would have fun reading this story and watching young faces react to Rudolph's nose being removed and later shining bright as he led Santa's sleigh. Great story.
Sanat appeared at Jingle's door (Santa)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Exactly! I can envision their eyes and how they would react...it's the best part of Christmas joy...the young ones and their feelings about it all.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute story, well written. Kids should love it, and there are good messages in there also about taking care of one's responsibilities and working together as a team to get things done. Cute picture! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This is a cute story, well written. Kids should love it, and there are good messages in there also about taking care of one's responsibilities and working together as a team to get things done. Cute picture! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the time and comments, Carol. Since you said kids should lov it, did you mean to give me three stars? It's okay if you did, but I hope you could tell me where I went wrong. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
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No, no, no! I'm so sorry. Not sure how that happened. I re-saved the review with a better score, so I hope that helps.
I'll let Tom know and see if he can delete that. So sorry!
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It's not a problem, Carol. I didn't think you meant it or I wouldn't have mentioned it. I know you are always so kind.
Smiles, Carol
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OK, I finally figured out how to email Tom, and let him know. Deepest apologies. I'm glad you let me know; I would never have known.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a really cute story. It should be in a children Christmas book. It is the kind of story little kids would love. I can picture it illustrated and ready for a Christmas purchase.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a really cute story. It should be in a children Christmas book. It is the kind of story little kids would love. I can picture it illustrated and ready for a Christmas purchase.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks Beth...I am so far behind on reviews and answering with me traveling.... Only 80 more to go!
Smiles, Carol
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Your better off than me. I have 150 to go. I had way over 200.
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I started yesterday and this morning I had 80 something. I am now down to 13. I'm not going to write until I get caught up. or go blind..LOL
Comment from patcelaw
This is a delightful story and I enjoyed listening to it so very much your structure of the story is very good and it was very easy to listen to because of the way that you have so carefully structured it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a delightful story and I enjoyed listening to it so very much your structure of the story is very good and it was very easy to listen to because of the way that you have so carefully structured it. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks as always, Patricia. I am thrilled that you enjoyed my story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Jingles learned a very serious lesson. This is a wonderful story and should be shared with children. Would you mind if I read it to my little granddaughters when they're here for Christmas?
Rudolph, shaking the snow from his fur, politely declined. "Sorry, Jingles. (declined, (I had to think about this one a little bit. I finally decided declined is speech.)
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Jingles learned a very serious lesson. This is a wonderful story and should be shared with children. Would you mind if I read it to my little granddaughters when they're here for Christmas?
Rudolph, shaking the snow from his fur, politely declined. "Sorry, Jingles. (declined, (I had to think about this one a little bit. I finally decided declined is speech.)
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Enjoy! I hope anyone who reads it, especially little ones will find it a fun and interesting story. I appreciate the comments and I hope the granddaughters enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gayla putnam
You need to get this published as a Christmas children's book. The visual imagery and characters are outstanding. I only saw one teeny plot hole. If Rudolph couldn't risk lending his nose briefly to Jingle because it might not shine brightly for Santa, how did he make it through Christmas deliveries since Jingle used it all night? Inquiring minds wonder? gayla
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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You need to get this published as a Christmas children's book. The visual imagery and characters are outstanding. I only saw one teeny plot hole. If Rudolph couldn't risk lending his nose briefly to Jingle because it might not shine brightly for Santa, how did he make it through Christmas deliveries since Jingle used it all night? Inquiring minds wonder? gayla
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Rudolph didn't trust Jingles so he used the charging as a ploy, but his nose is self-charging because one never knows when it will be needed. thanks for the awesome stars and comments. Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
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Thank goodness for a self charging nose. Its a good story. gayla
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a great Christmas Story. This would make a great book for kids. I love the lessons taught in your stories. Always relatable. Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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What a great Christmas Story. This would make a great book for kids. I love the lessons taught in your stories. Always relatable. Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I try to put a lesson in it without shoving it down the reader's throats. I want it to be fun to read. Thanks so much, Marilyn.
Smiles, Carol