Truth or Consequences
Cheapskate-chapter 411 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You are doing a great job ending each chapter on a cliffhanger. I would suggest you pick whose POV you want to use and give that person more internal feelings as well as what she/he says and does. This is an interesting story since nearly everyone has somehow allowed themselves to be sucked into the drug trade.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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You are doing a great job ending each chapter on a cliffhanger. I would suggest you pick whose POV you want to use and give that person more internal feelings as well as what she/he says and does. This is an interesting story since nearly everyone has somehow allowed themselves to be sucked into the drug trade.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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that is good advice. thank you. I am so swamped with things going on right now I haven't given this story enough thought.
After my neighborhood Christmas party tomorrow night, I will a have more time. thanks for reading and for the ideas!!