BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Reflecting..."Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Reflecting, has the proper formatting and sometimes seems to connect similar thoughts through feelings and disregarding time or location.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Reflecting, has the proper formatting and sometimes seems to connect similar thoughts through feelings and disregarding time or location.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Bill -- always good to hear from you, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Yvette,
A lovely and colorful addition to the Renga Book, my friend. A 5-7-5 twist it is and beautifully offered. Perfecto!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the book.
Love,
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yvette,
A lovely and colorful addition to the Renga Book, my friend. A 5-7-5 twist it is and beautifully offered. Perfecto!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the book.
Love,
Sal Xos
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Sal -- always glad to to hear your smile over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
A most striking post. Of course, alliteration is present in this Renga submission, which is something I try to do frequently.
Really interesting artwork and your color scheme just add to your overall presentation.
As we move into the coldest months, sunshine memories are ever present in our thoughts.
Have a good day.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yvette,
A most striking post. Of course, alliteration is present in this Renga submission, which is something I try to do frequently.
Really interesting artwork and your color scheme just add to your overall presentation.
As we move into the coldest months, sunshine memories are ever present in our thoughts.
Have a good day.
Mark
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Mark -- always so good to hear your perspective, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-A very good opening line followed
by a good image with "scarlet shadows."
-A very good satori line.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-A very good opening line followed
by a good image with "scarlet shadows."
-A very good satori line.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Pam -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter for the book and I am enjoying it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I hope that you're doing very well. May you have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a very well written chapter for the book and I am enjoying it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I hope that you're doing very well. May you have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Patricia -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, our memories are a mixed bag of the good, the bad and sometimes - the downright ugly. But we can choose which ones to indulge ourselves in now and then. Great entry to the book.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yes, our memories are a mixed bag of the good, the bad and sometimes - the downright ugly. But we can choose which ones to indulge ourselves in now and then. Great entry to the book.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady June -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvette,
This is a well done haiku. It has a good metaphor for memories and how they help us to fight life's problems.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Friday.
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yvette,
This is a well done haiku. It has a good metaphor for memories and how they help us to fight life's problems.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Friday.
Joan
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Joan -- always so good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your choice of words here in your unusual short poem Yvette, very inventive and pleasing. We keep those sunshine memories close to our hearts, love Dolly x x x
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I love your choice of words here in your unusual short poem Yvette, very inventive and pleasing. We keep those sunshine memories close to our hearts, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Wow, Dolly!! Thanx so much for those bright stars, my lady -- although it was where the pen went with this, I hope the folks aren't too upset that the Renga definitely took a big turn in the road with it! ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barry Penfold
Nothing like a twist to liven up the day. Thanks for sharing . RENGA appears to be becoming quite popular these days. I like the image and wording. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Nothing like a twist to liven up the day. Thanks for sharing . RENGA appears to be becoming quite popular these days. I like the image and wording. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, sir -- always good to hear from you over here! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a really attractive presentation with the pink and indigo-purple swirls. I guess we all have times when nostalgia overwhelms our logic. The only suggestion I had was to change 'malestrom' to 'maelstrom' for correct spelling. Although 'malestrom' reminds this reader that males sometimes cause those storms that are difficult to live through.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a really attractive presentation with the pink and indigo-purple swirls. I guess we all have times when nostalgia overwhelms our logic. The only suggestion I had was to change 'malestrom' to 'maelstrom' for correct spelling. Although 'malestrom' reminds this reader that males sometimes cause those storms that are difficult to live through.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanx for that spelling catch, my lady -- very appreciated! Typed that one up really fast after work and before climbing the stairs for bed... That's what I get for typing directly into the Fanstory Editor - lol! :-) :-) Take care! ;) Yvette