Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you contrasted the winter shadows with the summer sunlight. Light is something we miss in the winter especially in the Pacific NW where it's not only overcast but rains most of the time.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks so much for your review and comments. My eyes are so sensitive to light, I appreciate the overcast days. Maybe the medicine I've started will help with that. judi

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written for the multi author book and I enjoyed it very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you a very good evening and may God bless. Merry Christmas. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks so much for your review and comments. There have been a lot of submissions for the book. It's an interesting concept. In the past, people sat around writing poetry like that. Much better than quarreling over something. Glad you enjoyed. judi

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Judi,

Nice addition to this Renga poetry dialogue. Like the contrast between dark winter and bright summer. And yes, as we enter into the coldest months, our thoughts are to warmer times.

Mark

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks for your review and comments. I'm ready for summer after we've had one week of bad weather. I'm definitely not a winter person. judi