BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Seeds Prepare to Bloom"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from lyenochka
I love this poetic conversation you have us all participating in, MariVal. Looks like you got all the active poets involved. I can see your 5-7-5 follows the theme that I wrote last. So cool to see the chains of thought!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I love this poetic conversation you have us all participating in, MariVal. Looks like you got all the active poets involved. I can see your 5-7-5 follows the theme that I wrote last. So cool to see the chains of thought!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Yes, I am excited to see what a great reception it has. It took me a while but I think we are flowing nicely. Thank you for contributing. It's so exciting to see you write Japanese poetry.
Thank you very much, Big Sister,
Love
MariVal 😊❤️
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
You are such a talented author and it shows. I'm glad you explained what a Renga poem is, I have seen quite a few of them doing all these reviews. What a great way to get everyone involved.
The poem is beautiful as well as the artwork. Have a great evening my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
You are such a talented author and it shows. I'm glad you explained what a Renga poem is, I have seen quite a few of them doing all these reviews. What a great way to get everyone involved.
The poem is beautiful as well as the artwork. Have a great evening my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Cecilia. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I hope you'll join us.
Gypsy 😊
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Gypsy,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from shelley kaye
omg! 25 chapters now! dang! everyone is really taking to this!!
this was a cool one with the seeds ready to bloom
and the cool butterfly picks - 'divine promise' is a great satori!
nice imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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omg! 25 chapters now! dang! everyone is really taking to this!!
this was a cool one with the seeds ready to bloom
and the cool butterfly picks - 'divine promise' is a great satori!
nice imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I know! I am happy people are enjoying it.
Thank you, Shelley, I am glad you like it.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This follows on from the last verse beautifully (I'm afraid now mine didn't although I kept it to winter). You depict the divine promise of those seeds in your verse with very pleasing effect. Well done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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This follows on from the last verse beautifully (I'm afraid now mine didn't although I kept it to winter). You depict the divine promise of those seeds in your verse with very pleasing effect. Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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you did well, you kept the season going and it flowed well with the privious verse. I am glad you particate, hope you do it again.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊