Anatomy of a Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Anatomy of a Marriage Ch.14"A story of a couple whose marriage is in trouble.
22 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
She certainly has a tough decision on her hands but I don't think she should make that decision until she knows 100% what has been going on with him. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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She certainly has a tough decision on her hands but I don't think she should make that decision until she knows 100% what has been going on with him. Good chapter.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you. She is hoping things might work out. It is best to be sure before you make a permanent decision.
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Thank you. She is hoping things might work out. It is best to be sure before you make a permanent decision.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I am sure glad she went to the lawyer. He is hiding stuff. She needs to see what assets they have. She can't trust him, and he has probably gone through all their money. She will probe=ably have to sell the house to have any money. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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I am sure glad she went to the lawyer. He is hiding stuff. She needs to see what assets they have. She can't trust him, and he has probably gone through all their money. She will probe=ably have to sell the house to have any money. Karen
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I always like your review and comments.
Beth
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Thank you, Karen. I always like your review and comments.
Beth
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My brain never stops. And you write well.karen
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Out of six but I wish to compliment you for a job well done. Your interview with Styles was perfect, something that sounds as the real thing. Lets hope things turn out for the good. Twenty years and four precious lives is something not to waist. Again, well done,
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Out of six but I wish to compliment you for a job well done. Your interview with Styles was perfect, something that sounds as the real thing. Lets hope things turn out for the good. Twenty years and four precious lives is something not to waist. Again, well done,
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Chuck. I had to do some research to know what a lawyer and client might say to each other. I appreciate the review.
Beth
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Thank you, Chuck. I had to do some research to know what a lawyer and client might say to each other. I appreciate the review.
Beth
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You did well, I was impressed
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Marsha is certainly growing in confidence and appearing every bit the practical and pragmatic wife she needs to be in these circumstances. I like the way your story is going, Beth, because, not only is it entertaining, but it is also informative for anyone in the same boat.
He may have interest(s) that conflict...
Thank you for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Marsha is certainly growing in confidence and appearing every bit the practical and pragmatic wife she needs to be in these circumstances. I like the way your story is going, Beth, because, not only is it entertaining, but it is also informative for anyone in the same boat.
He may have interest(s) that conflict...
Thank you for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I appreciate your comments. This is story is forcing me to do some research. I didn't anything about interventions, rehab centers, or lawyers.
Beth
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Thank you, Debbie. I appreciate your comments. This is story is forcing me to do some research. I didn't anything about interventions, rehab centers, or lawyers.
Beth
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I would love to have been able to give you a six for this chapter, Beth, but they went really fast. This story is getting to a tense place. Will he balk at the idea of a separation, or be happy about it. He has a lot to lose. He had better start being honest with you and himself. What was that expensive piece of jewellery about? Marsha certainly didn't get it. It's time to get this sorted, he is an alcoholic, and he needs to own the fact!! Excellent, my friend. This is a story, well written and a brilliant read. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I would love to have been able to give you a six for this chapter, Beth, but they went really fast. This story is getting to a tense place. Will he balk at the idea of a separation, or be happy about it. He has a lot to lose. He had better start being honest with you and himself. What was that expensive piece of jewellery about? Marsha certainly didn't get it. It's time to get this sorted, he is an alcoholic, and he needs to own the fact!! Excellent, my friend. This is a story, well written and a brilliant read. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Sandra. I appreciate all you comments. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.
Beth
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Thank you so much Sandra. I appreciate all you comments. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.
Beth
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I think marsha is smart to doubt everything he tells her and file for separation. I wish she would file for divorcebut l know its hard. I'vebeenthroughit too. Cheaters are cheaters and it's hard to change... no matter how much she wants it. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I think marsha is smart to doubt everything he tells her and file for separation. I wish she would file for divorcebut l know its hard. I'vebeenthroughit too. Cheaters are cheaters and it's hard to change... no matter how much she wants it. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy. appreciate you comments. Marsha will likely come to that conclusion at some point.
Beth
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Thank you, Gypsy. appreciate you comments. Marsha will likely come to that conclusion at some point.
Beth
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Beth,
This is another great chapter in your book. Everything is coming along quite nicely. The book is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Beth,
This is another great chapter in your book. Everything is coming along quite nicely. The book is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Ceilia. I glad you are reviewing it. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
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Beth,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
Marsha is facing some tough decisions because it involves the children, the house, and a 20 year marriage. It's good that she is finding out a general roadmap so that she isn't blindsided by anything Trenton may say. A very believable story.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Marsha is facing some tough decisions because it involves the children, the house, and a 20 year marriage. It's good that she is finding out a general roadmap so that she isn't blindsided by anything Trenton may say. A very believable story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I've never dealt with a lawyer, interventions or alcoholic rehab centers, so this is making me do some research.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Marsha is doing the right thing, getting some legal counsel. She also needs documentation of the missing money. I do like the story.
He hasn't been honest with me and I tend to think it might have been going on for a while. (me,)
"Do you have actual proof of his infidelity. or do you just suspect it?" (infidelity,)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Marsha is doing the right thing, getting some legal counsel. She also needs documentation of the missing money. I do like the story.
He hasn't been honest with me and I tend to think it might have been going on for a while. (me,)
"Do you have actual proof of his infidelity. or do you just suspect it?" (infidelity,)
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm so glad you like the story. Thanks for help with commas.
Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This may be the smoothest read of yours I have read. No hiccups at all. The dialogues were clear and present, and very lifelike, as if experienced.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This may be the smoothest read of yours I have read. No hiccups at all. The dialogues were clear and present, and very lifelike, as if experienced.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you. This sounds like a nice compliment, unless you were implying most of my writing is terrible. lol
Beth
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No implying. I found this piece simply flowed without needing thought to understand which was a pleasure.