Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

What a beautiful poem this is for the Book of Renga. The picture is quite adorable and compliments the poem nicely. Those three short lines are very powerful and speak volumes.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024

Hi Cecilua, thank you for the great review. Brenda

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Dec-2024

Brenda,

You're welcome

Cecilia

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a wonderful renga for the book, and I do hope it continues along this theme, yes, our creator does provide us with all we require and more, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024

Thank you for the great review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.


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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024

Thank you for the great review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice chapter for the multi chapter book and I enjoyed very much reading it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very terrific evening and may your week be blessed. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024

Hi Patricia, thank you for the very nice review. Have a good day. Brenda