Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written poem and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you a very good day a wonderful week and may you have a merry Christmas. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thank you very much Wish you a great christmas season too.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I'm with you on that desire. I haven't seen snow where I live in over five years. I am hoping we get at least one snow day this year. Beautiful imagery. Like a painting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for stopping by.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Well, we're supposed to get some snow this week. So our wait is over! This was a nice addition to the book of renga. Glad you joined in the fun challenge!

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for stopping by.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely poem for the community book! I liked the personification of the sky and "dons a crimson gold mantle". Each season has its unique coloring and you captured that here.

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thank you Helen and for your extra gift od member cents
my son and family are coming on saturday I am waiting to see the girls..