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The Gospel

Minimalist Acrostic

29 total reviews 
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. This type of poem may look simple but I guarantee it isn't easy to write a smooth poem using only one word per line. You did a great job on this one. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thank you ,Marilyn for your kind and generous review.
Comment from artisart4u
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What I read is, a minimalist requires less than others, so this type of poem, might have a limited amount of words. Guess guessing.
Your acrostic is nice about God's empathy.
Congratulations on being Recognized and good luck with your acrostic poem.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Your review brightened my day, thank you.
Comment from Tim Margetts
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A great form, simple and pure in it's expression of the essntial truth of Christianity. :)
Nicely do, so thank you for shaping and blessing to you
Tim

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much Tim.
Comment from ESOSTINE
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Your Acrostic poem, The Gospel shows how strong your Christian faith. God's promise to humanity, those that obey His command is eternity. Well done, dear for sharing your inspiration. My warmest regards.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so very much for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, God promises after Adam and Eve fell in their rebellion, they are still promised, because they were pre Jesus, that Jesus would preach to the captives that He was the promised one. Beautifully written D&V , blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so very much, Roy for the kind review.
reply by royowen on 03-Dec-2024
    MOST WELCOME
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Your one word Acrostic works well because you were able to deliver a very powerful message. Eternal life is promised to all who hear the voice of God and know Him and follow Him. I hope your poem does well in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so very much for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Hi Don, I know how strong your faith is and this is a particularly lovely way to express your devotion in this acrostic verse in its strong minimalist form. As, according to the prompt, it can be based on one or more words, this would seem to be fully acceptable for the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you ,Debbie for the generous and kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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It amazes me how few people realize how great this promise is. God has promised to resurrect many people who have died, many from disease, murder, or just old age. His promise is not to just bring them back to life, but to do so to a world quite unlike the world they left. He has promised to bring them back to a word free of trouble and strife, want or need. A world that is exactly like the Garden of Eden was before Adam's sin. A world where there is no sickness or death.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    You are always so kind, Nomi thank you so much.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well done and I do think I may have seen it somewhere along the way, but I cannot tell you where I saw it or what it was called. Your presentation is lovely. Patricia.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so very much for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You did a good job with the form.
-A very good opening verse, followed
by "God's promise...Eternal life."
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much, Pam.
reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Dec-2024
    You are very welcome, Don.