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Remembering Childhood

My best dreams...

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Comment from evilynne
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The memories of your childhood are awesome. I came to the USA as a nine-year-old girl in 1959. We lived in Browns Mills, New Jersey, for a few years, then in Cookstown. Some of your childhood memories remind me of those times but, of course, I was a girl and did not go to Catholic school (no nuns). My friends and I roller skated on sidewalks and played softball in the streets. There were few cars on our street. I played with dolls at times, no Barbie until much later. It was a simpler time but, time does march on. Things in high school were a bit more complicated, as I was very shy and pretty much a loner. I graduated in 1968. Evi

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Aah Brown mills and it's murky tonic waters with warm and cold spots
    Good days 4 sur
Comment from Esther Brown
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Ah I much prefer your non-contest. But it is Saturday and sixes are gone. I check names in my messages to read stuff and only randomly vote. That incredibly cute boy was you? Were you a farm kid? The Catholic school sounds like the discipline was the same as in a boarding school, only we didn't go home for 3 months at a time. I grew up in northern Congo. Esther

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    The photographs were snapped by me and the children my subjects
    Glad you enjoyed the read
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Very nice;y done, Sir! Seems like quite the walk down memory lane So which of these kids are you? Inquiring minds want to know. I am guessing number 1 and 2?
Douglas

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    None of the above
    They were subjects I found interesting when I loved photography
    Thanks for the visit and comment
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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You obviously have no issues with your memory. Your memories were from a boys perspective but I could still relate because I had two brothers who did similar activities. The world was better back then, you can't convince me otherwise. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    I agree so I have no reason to argue
    Thank you, friend.
Comment from Begin Again
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Reminiscing! Looking back at our childhood we are able to block out any dark times and simply remember those moments that were special and made life worth living. It's a shame that children today are so tied up in media and tech gadgets that they miss out on all the wonderful simple things. Great job!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    I agree
    If there were 'bad' times Bach then they were washed away in the high tides of exuberance
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Tom,

This is a wonderful story. I'm on the tail-end of the Boomers and so much in this story is I remember. I guess some of these things are generational. I know the kids of today have no idea what a great childhood we had.

Well done

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    A stay at home mother a half dozen or even a Baker dozen of siblings
    Four kids to a bed
    Discipline
    Parental expectations more often met than fallen short
    I miss them
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 30-Nov-2024
    Tom,

    I know you do. Those were the good old days.

    Cecilia
Comment from Julie Helms
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What a wonderful collection of memories! No staring endlessly at your phone or hours playing video games as if the virtual world was better than the real one. I must be about 15 years behind you, yet there isn't much difference in the experiences... except some names: Esso was the only gas station I recognized, and my dolls were Bless You Baby Tender Love (she sneezed) and Baby Alive (she peed and pooped). The girls played jacks and Chinese jump rope at recess.
You should have just created a contest when you have something like this. I messaged (the other) Tom about a month ago about the total lack of prose contests. He said he'd look into it. A couple contests appeared right after but it's back to mostly poetry again. I sure would like more, but I was afraid people might be getting sick of me posting so many.
Only possible edit I saw: no hyphen in air conditioning.
I really enjoyed your story, Tom!
Julie
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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    I did too... enjoyed the walk down memory lane. Glad it brought to you great things passed but unforgotten/ Thanks for the read.