Winter Moon
Iroha poem20 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I could visualize a winter night. I felt the cold as the trees shook, branches barely. Beautifully descriptive and definitely set a scene. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
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I could visualize a winter night. I felt the cold as the trees shook, branches barely. Beautifully descriptive and definitely set a scene. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I thought about
the Winter Moon even though it can be freezing outside - it is still
beautiful! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome
and compliments the words of this poem,
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I thought about
the Winter Moon even though it can be freezing outside - it is still
beautiful! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome
and compliments the words of this poem,
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by and for the encouragement ..I amhappy that you liked my poem
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this Iroha poem and the picture of the full moon that aptly illustrates the poem. the last lines are particularly effective
unmoved by earth's extreme plight
lunar routine just goes on
Shivering earth sighs
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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I like this Iroha poem and the picture of the full moon that aptly illustrates the poem. the last lines are particularly effective
unmoved by earth's extreme plight
lunar routine just goes on
Shivering earth sighs
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It's a beautifully descriptive poem with a beautiful presentation to go with us. I enjoyed reading. Your words made a vivid image in my mind.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It's a beautifully descriptive poem with a beautiful presentation to go with us. I enjoyed reading. Your words made a vivid image in my mind.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Santa,
This is a well done poem for the club. It reminds us rhat there is beauty in winter if you look for it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy your weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Santa,
This is a well done poem for the club. It reminds us rhat there is beauty in winter if you look for it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy your weekend
Joan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for stopping by .Yes there isbeauty in winter if you overlook the shivers!
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You're very welcome, Santha.
Joan
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written Japanese poem for the club event and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is ready and loud. I wish you a very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This is a beautifully written Japanese poem for the club event and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is ready and loud. I wish you a very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was beautifully descriptive, giving us as lovely a picture in with your words as the one above it. I enjoyed reading your poem and think you did a fabulous job for the club entry. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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That was beautifully descriptive, giving us as lovely a picture in with your words as the one above it. I enjoyed reading your poem and think you did a fabulous job for the club entry. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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Comment from jaded831
Mystifying, your poem creates a mood. It gave me chills, at the same time it creates a moment. One that changes with the seasons, yet is recreated throughout time. Well done.
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Mystifying, your poem creates a mood. It gave me chills, at the same time it creates a moment. One that changes with the seasons, yet is recreated throughout time. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent poem. My favorite lines are, unmoved by Earth's extreme plight lunar routine just goes on shivering Earth sighs. What a powerful and moving few lines. They capture the essence of how it must feel to be the moon on a winter night in the coldest dark sky.
I love nature and the moon's cycles endlessly revolving whether we below care or not.
Jesse
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This is an excellent poem. My favorite lines are, unmoved by Earth's extreme plight lunar routine just goes on shivering Earth sighs. What a powerful and moving few lines. They capture the essence of how it must feel to be the moon on a winter night in the coldest dark sky.
I love nature and the moon's cycles endlessly revolving whether we below care or not.
Jesse
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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Comment from zanya
Here is an interesting new Japanese poetic format IROHA (for me at least!) and what beautiful sentiments are expressed here about' Winter Moon' line 2 is superb. An exquisite visual reflecting the sentiments.
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Here is an interesting new Japanese poetic format IROHA (for me at least!) and what beautiful sentiments are expressed here about' Winter Moon' line 2 is superb. An exquisite visual reflecting the sentiments.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
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