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He never slumbers

A song

19 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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While I was growing up, one of my favorite gospel song writers was Fanny J. Crosby. She wrote so many songs and she was blind at six years old! Good writing. Karen

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thanks Karen for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 02-Dec-2024
    :-)
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thanks for sharing your God-given talent with us. I'm glad you were able to reproduce this. As I get older nd more feeble, I find I need more rest nd sleep. Thank God He is above these things and we will see Him soon.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thanks Jim, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a beautiful song, Roy, closely tied to Scripture. I'm guessing the melody was just as lovely. You used nice rhymes in the song, and the rhythm is steady throughout. What was the name of your vocal group? Thanks for sharing this. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Carol Clark2 on 30-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. Lovely song!
Comment from Begin Again
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Wonderful way to start my morning...a peom to remind me that He is always at my side regardless of where I am or what time it is. He shall not forsake me if I follow and believe. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these great comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I have always said that a good poem makes a good song and vice versa. This is a good song eith scripture and poetic verses.
Would have liked to hear the melodía and actual song. Next time.
RJ

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 30-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very nice written song and we all should be very thankful that God never slumbers and he never sleeps. He is always attentive to our needs. May you have a blessed day and may you have a very good weekend. Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Pat, RJ for these generous comments pand review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image and presentation, Roy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good song
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse
that shows God will always be with us
if we choose to let Him in. The last
two lines in the verse support that very well,
as well as chorus 1 and 2.
-Very well done.



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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Pam, for these generous comments pand review, blessings Roy
reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Nov-2024
    You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Exceptional
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Roy,

This is a beautiful song. You are very talented in everything you do. God truly has Blessed you with the pen. You have a special place in heaven my friend.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Cecilia, for these generous comments pand review, blessings Roy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 30-Nov-2024
    Roy,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
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i would rate this 6 stars but didn't have any, this is extremely powerful and strengthening spiritually, i really loved your song, this would be great to sing in a church,
many thanks,
Sarah

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thanks Sarah, for these generous comments pand review, blessings Roy
reply by Sarah Probe S. on 30-Nov-2024
    💕