Miracles
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Comment from royowen
I think because of God, our better attributes are inherited by our offspring, when I look at my daughters, and see my grandchildren have inherited the best of their parents I'm sure, yes, Margaret is a fighter, I'm glad Allie turned up to reassure Garth, you are a dreamer like me, Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I think because of God, our better attributes are inherited by our offspring, when I look at my daughters, and see my grandchildren have inherited the best of their parents I'm sure, yes, Margaret is a fighter, I'm glad Allie turned up to reassure Garth, you are a dreamer like me, Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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My pleasure Carol, don't worry I know the pressure,
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
My friend what and awesome chapter. I'm glad Donatelli is starting to have spurts of memory. I know it's just a matter of time that he fully regains his memory. I love this book and like I said it's going to be a #1 seller. The whole series is.
I am almost done with Brushstrokes and will let you know what I think. So far I am loving it. You are so brilliant my friend and I admire you a lot.
Happy Thanksgiving and I hope you are able to enjoy it without stressing.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
My friend what and awesome chapter. I'm glad Donatelli is starting to have spurts of memory. I know it's just a matter of time that he fully regains his memory. I love this book and like I said it's going to be a #1 seller. The whole series is.
I am almost done with Brushstrokes and will let you know what I think. So far I am loving it. You are so brilliant my friend and I admire you a lot.
Happy Thanksgiving and I hope you are able to enjoy it without stressing.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, people have a tendency to jump to conclusions, and is hard to get something out of their mind once they've dreamed it up. Especially, with those like me who've always fed the fire. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Yes, people have a tendency to jump to conclusions, and is hard to get something out of their mind once they've dreamed it up. Especially, with those like me who've always fed the fire. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, Allie has given Garth permission to love again, but with Rebecca. Nice touch! It's fun how your characters float in and out of scenes. Good scene with Jenna and Matthew, and Eleanor saves the day again, hopefully. Tender dialogue between Eleanor and Jenna. Another good chapter! Blessings & Happy Thanksgiving! Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow, Allie has given Garth permission to love again, but with Rebecca. Nice touch! It's fun how your characters float in and out of scenes. Good scene with Jenna and Matthew, and Eleanor saves the day again, hopefully. Tender dialogue between Eleanor and Jenna. Another good chapter! Blessings & Happy Thanksgiving! Carol
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is excellently written and well worth the stars I have dropped onto it.
The way you are handling Matthews amnesia, as someone who also has a post traumatic amnesia you are doing a grand job. From personal experience, even if memories don't come back except as little snatches here and there, life moves on and just picks up where the new ones start.
I am sure he will be fine.
The bit with Garth and Allie, perfect.
Tim x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This is excellently written and well worth the stars I have dropped onto it.
The way you are handling Matthews amnesia, as someone who also has a post traumatic amnesia you are doing a grand job. From personal experience, even if memories don't come back except as little snatches here and there, life moves on and just picks up where the new ones start.
I am sure he will be fine.
The bit with Garth and Allie, perfect.
Tim x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Lots of negative thoughts coming from Jenna in this chapter, but Eleanor is up to the task of setting her attitude straight!
I had to skip a couple of chapters to try and catch up with your posts, but I'm pretty sure I'll be able to catch up with the story line. There won't be much reading this holiday weekend. Just eating and football:-)
xo
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Lots of negative thoughts coming from Jenna in this chapter, but Eleanor is up to the task of setting her attitude straight!
I had to skip a couple of chapters to try and catch up with your posts, but I'm pretty sure I'll be able to catch up with the story line. There won't be much reading this holiday weekend. Just eating and football:-)
xo
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow, this was a fabulous chapter, Carol! It was good of Ellie to come and talk to Garth, now he can move forward and love Rebecca knowing he's allowed to love again, with Allie's blessing. Now you have to sort Matthew out, his memories are harder to fit together so he can see one picture, the right one. He really can be a stubborn old goat at times. Well, well saw a lot in this chapter, and it was very well paced and the story not rushed. Well done, my friend. I don't know how you do it, but you can certainly write! I think you must slow down again once this book is finished, or you'll burn yourself out! Love you lots. Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow, this was a fabulous chapter, Carol! It was good of Ellie to come and talk to Garth, now he can move forward and love Rebecca knowing he's allowed to love again, with Allie's blessing. Now you have to sort Matthew out, his memories are harder to fit together so he can see one picture, the right one. He really can be a stubborn old goat at times. Well, well saw a lot in this chapter, and it was very well paced and the story not rushed. Well done, my friend. I don't know how you do it, but you can certainly write! I think you must slow down again once this book is finished, or you'll burn yourself out! Love you lots. Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Rick Gardner
More interesting progression, waiting for the next episodes. The characters keep evolving and yet have the same thoughts they had before.
sometimes hard to tract them all since this method creates trouble remembering what happened before.
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More interesting progression, waiting for the next episodes. The characters keep evolving and yet have the same thoughts they had before.
sometimes hard to tract them all since this method creates trouble remembering what happened before.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lancellot
A very emotional chapter for your characters. Would Garth really be shocked by Allie's ghost, at this point? Well written and edited, a sure-fire win for your fans.
notes:
"Margaret? Who the hell is Margaret?" Eleanor's sister?"
-"Margaret? Who the hell is Margaret? Eleanor's sister?"
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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A very emotional chapter for your characters. Would Garth really be shocked by Allie's ghost, at this point? Well written and edited, a sure-fire win for your fans.
notes:
"Margaret? Who the hell is Margaret?" Eleanor's sister?"
-"Margaret? Who the hell is Margaret? Eleanor's sister?"
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
