Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Miracles - Chap 25"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is an excellent chapter. I can see you're tying up loose ends and I like that. You're doing a good job with it. I just can't wait for Jenna and Matthew to settle their issues. Well, Garth and Matthew need to solve their problem too.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This is an excellent chapter. I can see you're tying up loose ends and I like that. You're doing a good job with it. I just can't wait for Jenna and Matthew to settle their issues. Well, Garth and Matthew need to solve their problem too.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, you're flying right along, and I hope you'll make your deadline. I mean, it might be hard to keep up, but I'm sure it's much harder to get them written. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Well, you're flying right along, and I hope you'll make your deadline. I mean, it might be hard to keep up, but I'm sure it's much harder to get them written. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
A love interest between Danni and Tango is brewing -- an unlikely match. It's cute that Miriam is riding in a car for the first time. It should be quite a reunion at the hospital. Most of the bad guys are now in custody, so hopefully nothing bad will happen there. Good chapter! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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A love interest between Danni and Tango is brewing -- an unlikely match. It's cute that Miriam is riding in a car for the first time. It should be quite a reunion at the hospital. Most of the bad guys are now in custody, so hopefully nothing bad will happen there. Good chapter! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Hey Carol, don't apostrophyse, we want the chapters.... Well, I darn well do.
Now this is awesome and I am waiting no more than 10 minutes before I expect the next one, then you can take a break, and the one after by dinner time. You hear?
LOL
This is going so well and I know you have this in the bag.
Tim x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Hey Carol, don't apostrophyse, we want the chapters.... Well, I darn well do.
Now this is awesome and I am waiting no more than 10 minutes before I expect the next one, then you can take a break, and the one after by dinner time. You hear?
LOL
This is going so well and I know you have this in the bag.
Tim x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Things are finally starting to come together. Miriam is Rebecca's grandmother. Interesting. You keep the suspense moving as you race to the finish line.
No need to apologize I prefer them back to back. You got this friend.
Ceciliia
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Things are finally starting to come together. Miriam is Rebecca's grandmother. Interesting. You keep the suspense moving as you race to the finish line.
No need to apologize I prefer them back to back. You got this friend.
Ceciliia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Carol,
This is a really lovely story. It's amazing that you can write like this -- a book in a month.
Your story flows well.
Note: in the paragraph starting with "Tango... there are some extra characters there and in the following paragraphs.
Excellent story, Carol.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
This is a really lovely story. It's amazing that you can write like this -- a book in a month.
Your story flows well.
Note: in the paragraph starting with "Tango... there are some extra characters there and in the following paragraphs.
Excellent story, Carol.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You're forgiven! LOL. You can post the next part whenever you like in the next few minutes!! Lol. Things are really coming together. Rossi is out of the way, and now we need Crystal to testify against Bruiser, AND we have to see Doyle losing all his power and put into a cold empy cell, with his 'friends' inside waiting to get to him. I can't wait to read that part! We just have to get Matthew and Jenna back together and hear Matthew's surprise at becoming a father!! That will be amazing. But he has to realise, Garth is his friend, and was only comforting Jenna. I can't wait! Nearly there, Carol!! Loving it! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
You need to go in and edit these, just delete the little blighters hanging onto the end. :) Love you lots, xx
believe this..... And it gets better....
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You're forgiven! LOL. You can post the next part whenever you like in the next few minutes!! Lol. Things are really coming together. Rossi is out of the way, and now we need Crystal to testify against Bruiser, AND we have to see Doyle losing all his power and put into a cold empy cell, with his 'friends' inside waiting to get to him. I can't wait to read that part! We just have to get Matthew and Jenna back together and hear Matthew's surprise at becoming a father!! That will be amazing. But he has to realise, Garth is his friend, and was only comforting Jenna. I can't wait! Nearly there, Carol!! Loving it! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
You need to go in and edit these, just delete the little blighters hanging onto the end. :) Love you lots, xx
believe this..... And it gets better....
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
You're doing great considering the deadline and the many things that you are juggling!
I am glad that you have given Tango and love interest even if Danni is a ghost. However, I'm not sure that ghosts who have no physical body would have so many sensations.
Question: Wasn't Miriam killed when she was quite young? I would think her ghost would appear the age when she died.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You're doing great considering the deadline and the many things that you are juggling!
I am glad that you have given Tango and love interest even if Danni is a ghost. However, I'm not sure that ghosts who have no physical body would have so many sensations.
Question: Wasn't Miriam killed when she was quite young? I would think her ghost would appear the age when she died.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol