Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Burning Pockets"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from BethShelby
Miranda was really having a good day until Dougie came around messing with her. I wouldn't want him to find out about the reward money, I'm sure he have a way to make it disappear.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Miranda was really having a good day until Dougie came around messing with her. I wouldn't want him to find out about the reward money, I'm sure he have a way to make it disappear.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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He probably already knows. Small town gossip spreads fast. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love it! That slimeball having his car painted over, now people will start looking at him and wondering....
As for Dougie, I don't think Santa wants him messing up him home! Lol. I do wonder what has really brought him home. It certainly wasn't Waylon, that's for sure.
So, what is Miranda going to do with all that money? I'm sure Waylon is in for a surprise, shoes and boat?? I would love to be able to surprise my family with lovely gifts, but not possible on my pension. This was a lovely chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I love it! That slimeball having his car painted over, now people will start looking at him and wondering....
As for Dougie, I don't think Santa wants him messing up him home! Lol. I do wonder what has really brought him home. It certainly wasn't Waylon, that's for sure.
So, what is Miranda going to do with all that money? I'm sure Waylon is in for a surprise, shoes and boat?? I would love to be able to surprise my family with lovely gifts, but not possible on my pension. This was a lovely chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I've got a pretty tight budget myself, but in my imagination, I've spent it all. Lol. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Another alright chapter. Just one possible spag. The rest was great!
Maybe the apple does('nt) fall far from the tree.
Loved this "It's cheaper than therapy"
And this "where he will freeze his over sized ego off."
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Another alright chapter. Just one possible spag. The rest was great!
Maybe the apple does('nt) fall far from the tree.
Loved this "It's cheaper than therapy"
And this "where he will freeze his over sized ego off."
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this. Especially detailing what you enjoyed about the chapter. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Miranda is so honest, and down-to-earth. It's good she's excited to be able to do a few special things for the people she cares about. Dougie is annoying, trying to put the blame on Miranda for his decision to leave. He's a user. I hope he doesn't lure Waylon away, just to get even. Good writing. A story which absorbs because it is realistic in content and dialogue.
Wendy
Edit: Which time was I holding you to tightly, (too)
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Miranda is so honest, and down-to-earth. It's good she's excited to be able to do a few special things for the people she cares about. Dougie is annoying, trying to put the blame on Miranda for his decision to leave. He's a user. I hope he doesn't lure Waylon away, just to get even. Good writing. A story which absorbs because it is realistic in content and dialogue.
Wendy
Edit: Which time was I holding you to tightly, (too)
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I really appreciate the nice compliment. And for the edits. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Miranda and Waylon's discussion of their Santa lists was amusing. Miranda and Mitch's discussion about her sudden wealth was interesting. From her point of view, I must have really loved my week working for a florist who threw bouquets at any of us who made ones she didn't like. I just hope her last discussion with Dougie doesn't make him take Waylon away from her out of pure meanness.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Miranda and Waylon's discussion of their Santa lists was amusing. Miranda and Mitch's discussion about her sudden wealth was interesting. From her point of view, I must have really loved my week working for a florist who threw bouquets at any of us who made ones she didn't like. I just hope her last discussion with Dougie doesn't make him take Waylon away from her out of pure meanness.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Of course Dougie will try to use Waylon against her. He's a manipulative rat. Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You always make me feel that I am there seeing these scenes play out for real Gretchen, this is the secret of a great writer. Another fine chapter in the Miranda saga, she is enjoying toying with all that money in her mind, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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You always make me feel that I am there seeing these scenes play out for real Gretchen, this is the secret of a great writer. Another fine chapter in the Miranda saga, she is enjoying toying with all that money in her mind, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I really appreciate the kind words. I thank you also for the extra star. Gretchen
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Your work is always worthy of six stars Gretchen, you are very welcome x x x
Comment from Esther Brown
Very much enjoyed that one. Revenge is sweet and it is always nice to know you have enough money to fund the campaign. Tiny error: copied here: you to needs to be you too. I enjoy your writing. Esther
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Very much enjoyed that one. Revenge is sweet and it is always nice to know you have enough money to fund the campaign. Tiny error: copied here: you to needs to be you too. I enjoy your writing. Esther
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this nice review and for the edit. I appreciate this. Gretchen