Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Confusion"A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
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Comment from Sarah Probe S.
very captivating thrilling fiction script, that would be interesting to use in a horror movie, many thanks for sharing your talent with us,
have a lovely Sunday,
Sarah
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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very captivating thrilling fiction script, that would be interesting to use in a horror movie, many thanks for sharing your talent with us,
have a lovely Sunday,
Sarah
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Sarah, for this lovely review, my friend. I would love to see this on the big screen.
God bless,
Steve
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hello Dear,
I would encourage You to contact movie producers and actors fan clubs directly through the Facebook website,
Take care !
Sarah :)
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hello Dear,
I would encourage You to contact movie producers and actors fan clubs directly through the Facebook website,
Take care !
Sarah :)
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hello Dear,
I would encourage You to contact movie producers and actors fan clubs directly through the Facebook website,
Take care !
Sarah :)
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I will look into this, that would be awesome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story. You have quite the imagination. The story flows nicely from start to finish.
I found one small error:
both jumped off of the couch, and (Marting) grabbed me and -you have an extra (g).
Great job.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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This is a great story. You have quite the imagination. The story flows nicely from start to finish.
I found one small error:
both jumped off of the couch, and (Marting) grabbed me and -you have an extra (g).
Great job.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, for the incredible and helpful review, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
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You're welcome
Cecilia
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=)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
uhoh! Now it's confirmed there are two of the creatures. I hope that information doesn't make it easier for them to put Dodie Rae and Bae Lynn together. Good job, Steve. Bring on the bloodshed lol
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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uhoh! Now it's confirmed there are two of the creatures. I hope that information doesn't make it easier for them to put Dodie Rae and Bae Lynn together. Good job, Steve. Bring on the bloodshed lol
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Bring on the bloodshed! I love it and it is coming for sure. Thank you, Marilyn for this excellent review, my friend. Sorry for the delay, work has been a beast this week.
God bless,
Steve
