Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I have never thought about the concept that Adam was God's first son. But he was. Made of flesh and flawed. This was a beautiful poem. Through Him, all things are possible. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thanks Gretchen, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Hie words were given to instruct us in the way we should live, even so, he still puts them into our hearts.
Moreover, he gave his Son through whom we are restored. Thanks for sharing.
RJ

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thanks RJ, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by RJ Heritage on 23-Nov-2024

reply by RJ Heritage on 23-Nov-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Roy,

Another stellar poem. It's short and sweet and gets right to the point. I love it. Every poem you write Christ shines bright through your poems.

Well Done

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thanks Cecilia, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 23-Nov-2024

Roy,

You're welcome

Cecilia