The Wind
Haiku18 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and it was a pleasure to listen to and also your presentation is very nice. I wish you a very good day. I wish you also a terrific weekend. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This is very nicely written and it was a pleasure to listen to and also your presentation is very nice. I wish you a very good day. I wish you also a terrific weekend. May God bless you and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by...
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a neat poem. You give the breeze a personality. I could visualize a woman, comforting and soothing someone distraught or upset. Skillfully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This was such a neat poem. You give the breeze a personality. I could visualize a woman, comforting and soothing someone distraught or upset. Skillfully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much once again for this honours,
Comment from June Sargent
A romantic haiku that involves the senses of sight, sound and touch. The sensuous imagery of being caressed by the wind is beautifully highlighted by the artwork. I can almost hear the seagulls...and taste the salty air
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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A romantic haiku that involves the senses of sight, sound and touch. The sensuous imagery of being caressed by the wind is beautifully highlighted by the artwork. I can almost hear the seagulls...and taste the salty air
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much .Thank you especially for catching that sensuous aspect .I hoped readers would catch but only some did..
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Interesting picture. How do they make these things? Your poetry styling invoked a feeling of the wind blowing the hair off my neck. Loosening my long sleeves, Messing up my hair. And, I was inside at the time! Karen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Interesting picture. How do they make these things? Your poetry styling invoked a feeling of the wind blowing the hair off my neck. Loosening my long sleeves, Messing up my hair. And, I was inside at the time! Karen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you Karen .You have a unique style of reviewing..
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So...is that good or bad? :-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There are many warm, descriptive words in the lovely huiku, Santha, it's almost as if the wind is flirting with you. I love it. And the picture that you used goes with your words as if it was actually painted for your poem. Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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There are many warm, descriptive words in the lovely huiku, Santha, it's almost as if the wind is flirting with you. I love it. And the picture that you used goes with your words as if it was actually painted for your poem. Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much Sandra especially for catching the sensuous aspect of it...
Comment from kiwisteveh
Nice romantic haiku presenting the wind as a comforting friend, almost like a guardian angel and topped off with a splendid alliteration in the last line.
I like the pic too which adds to the romantic feeling of the piece.
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Nice romantic haiku presenting the wind as a comforting friend, almost like a guardian angel and topped off with a splendid alliteration in the last line.
I like the pic too which adds to the romantic feeling of the piece.
Steve
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by..
Comment from Aussie
Well written Sanku. In the Book of Psalms, it says "And God sent the south wind to cool the land." In a hot country such as yours, a cooling wind would be so welcome. I found your poem very descriptive, I could feel the wind embracing me. K xx
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Well written Sanku. In the Book of Psalms, it says "And God sent the south wind to cool the land." In a hot country such as yours, a cooling wind would be so welcome. I found your poem very descriptive, I could feel the wind embracing me. K xx
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you for stopping by .Yes we depend so much on these winds...
Comment from lyenochka
I love the "hug" of the wind. Great use of alliteration!
In the last line, did you mean "silken"? I didn't know the word "siken" in "heaven's siken sigh."
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I love the "hug" of the wind. Great use of alliteration!
In the last line, did you mean "silken"? I didn't know the word "siken" in "heaven's siken sigh."
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Yes i meant silken ..i have corrected it .Thank you,Helen very much for pointing it out.
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Thanks for confirming. I wasn't sure if it were an Indian word you meant.