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Emotional Dawn

When confidence lost is found . . .

25 total reviews 
Comment from Colorado Owl
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This is an excellent reminder that we should begin each day with hope. The baggage of yesterday can ruin our frame of mind and thwart the best of plans. Thank you!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Some life experiences change our perspective on life Yvette and your words explain how we still remain hopeful that life will improve no matter the circumstances, I enjoyed the positivity in your post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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I love the hope of the new beginnings in every line: "hope", "genesis", "morn" and "Dayspring". I rejoice with you in the new Hope and joy of the new beginning. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from judiverse
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Yes, morning gives us hope. We can look forward to the new day and maybe find solutions to yesterday's problems. Lovely artwork choice and lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from June Sargent
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This is a beautiful and inspirational entry for the contest that highlights the joy of dawn and new beginnings. Especially after a dark night of challenges.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hey Yvette.
Every day we get out of bed there needs to be some hope. Effervescent hope bubbles up like a fountain. You conclude with the day pulling all the parts together.
Nice job.
Z

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from kahpot
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You certainly have a way with words young lady, so descriptive that your words enhance this gorgeous artwork, so very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I liked reading this short poem. The language here has a more ethereal quality.
I wonder if your last line would be an appealing title for a musical composition in real life. Nice share.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from Janet Foor
Exceptional
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Each word in this beautiful 5/7/5 poem has depth.
"Dayspring rhapsody" is my favorite but " finds genesis in morn's song is stellar.

Beautiful Yvette
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Y.M.,

What a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Those three lines send a powerful message to the reader. The picture is perfect for this poem.

Great job and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024