Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Miracles - Chap 17"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a very satisfying chapter. Eleanor sees Matthew, arranges for his medical treatment, and then goes to the mansion to have big fun. I liked the way Jenna quickly told Rebecca Eleanor was a ghost. And before Rebecca could comprehend what Jenna meant, Eleanor was busy performing ghostly antics. This added a bit of comedy to a serious story. Well done, and enjoyable.
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This is a very satisfying chapter. Eleanor sees Matthew, arranges for his medical treatment, and then goes to the mansion to have big fun. I liked the way Jenna quickly told Rebecca Eleanor was a ghost. And before Rebecca could comprehend what Jenna meant, Eleanor was busy performing ghostly antics. This added a bit of comedy to a serious story. Well done, and enjoyable.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Those two ghost gals could probably scare the pants off about anybody with their antics. But I'd be right there laughing with them through every scare fest. Thanks for sharing.
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Those two ghost gals could probably scare the pants off about anybody with their antics. But I'd be right there laughing with them through every scare fest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You have DeLuca jumping to his feet and his chair scraping loudly against the floor, but I don't see where he ever sat down. Maybe go back and make sure he is seated.
Carol, I'm still in awe of how well you write at this pace. It takes me two weeks to turn out a book chapter.
See you soon.
xo
Pam
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You have DeLuca jumping to his feet and his chair scraping loudly against the floor, but I don't see where he ever sat down. Maybe go back and make sure he is seated.
Carol, I'm still in awe of how well you write at this pace. It takes me two weeks to turn out a book chapter.
See you soon.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a fun chapter, with the ghosts scaring DeLuca and Owen Maxwell. Eleanor and Miriam make an interesting team. Too bad the men realized a helicopter was landing. I hope Matthew gets the help he needs.
I hope you're enjoying your great-grandchildren. Have a safe trip home. Carol
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This is a fun chapter, with the ghosts scaring DeLuca and Owen Maxwell. Eleanor and Miriam make an interesting team. Too bad the men realized a helicopter was landing. I hope Matthew gets the help he needs.
I hope you're enjoying your great-grandchildren. Have a safe trip home. Carol
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from karenina
Comic relief! These moments when Elanor channels her inner imp and creates all kinds of chaos of the "haunted" variety give me a tickle, I must say! Those two tough guys could have been walk-ons in "Ghostbusters"--
this is a fun breath of (spirited) fresh air -- and we all know things are going to get serious real soon!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Comic relief! These moments when Elanor channels her inner imp and creates all kinds of chaos of the "haunted" variety give me a tickle, I must say! Those two tough guys could have been walk-ons in "Ghostbusters"--
this is a fun breath of (spirited) fresh air -- and we all know things are going to get serious real soon!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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i love when Eleanor goes crazy... It's the best part of the book for me. LOl It's fun! Thanks so much.
Love ya, Carol
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Me too! Even better than my Garth crush!
(grin)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Matthew will be safe, and I know Garth will be grateful for what Eleanor did to get him the medical care he needed. This was a fun chapter to read.
She laughed, "Don't get greedy, Willow. (laughed.)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I'm glad Matthew will be safe, and I know Garth will be grateful for what Eleanor did to get him the medical care he needed. This was a fun chapter to read.
She laughed, "Don't get greedy, Willow. (laughed.)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It's okay if you gave me the four stars because of my error, but I thought I'd mention it. Thanks so much for reading and continuing to enjoy it. Sorry I'm behind on everything. Crazy me thinking I could write a novel in 30 days and go on vacation.
Smiles, Carol
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I would never give you four stars. It was a mistake and I have updated it. So, sorry. Thank you for brining to my attention.
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I would have understood if you had...You've tried and tried to steer me right on those darn commas and periods but we both know I still struggle. But I do thank you for your kindness.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great and exciting chapter. I love how Eleanor did her thing, and those guys decided to leave really fast. Great descriptive words and imagery. Looking forward to reading more. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This is a really great and exciting chapter. I love how Eleanor did her thing, and those guys decided to leave really fast. Great descriptive words and imagery. Looking forward to reading more. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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A lot of drama! Thanks for enjoying the story and my apologies for being so far behind. Writing for the contest and having to be done by the end of the month is murder. I don't know if it will happen, but I'm trying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was such fun, Carol, I wish we had ghosts like that in our non fiction lives. The fun we could have! Perhaps I'll ask if I could pop back to help people, Lol. This was a wonderful chapter, my friend, the helicopter was a good touch, and I'm glad they didn't suss that out. Now to get Matthew to safety and get this Doyle fellow sorted so that he never leaves prison again, and all his 'servants' stop serving him! I loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next one. You have nine days left!! You can do it, I have faith in you. Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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That was such fun, Carol, I wish we had ghosts like that in our non fiction lives. The fun we could have! Perhaps I'll ask if I could pop back to help people, Lol. This was a wonderful chapter, my friend, the helicopter was a good touch, and I'm glad they didn't suss that out. Now to get Matthew to safety and get this Doyle fellow sorted so that he never leaves prison again, and all his 'servants' stop serving him! I loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next one. You have nine days left!! You can do it, I have faith in you. Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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A lot of drama! Thanks for enjoying the story and my apologies for being so far behind. Writing for the contest and having to be done by the end of the month is murder. I don't know if it will happen, but I'm trying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol my friend what another stellar chapter. Eleanor sure is creative when the time comes. I'm glad she finally got to see Matthew and get him to a facility that could take care of him. As always i'm sitting on the edge waiting for another chapter.
Great job.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Carol my friend what another stellar chapter. Eleanor sure is creative when the time comes. I'm glad she finally got to see Matthew and get him to a facility that could take care of him. As always i'm sitting on the edge waiting for another chapter.
Great job.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It's you in my cheering section that keeps me moving forward with another chapter. It's crazy enough writing but trying to read, review and be with the girls is sending me to the looney bin. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
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Carol,
My friend we don't want you in the loony bin. Enjoy the madness. I love your books. I'm almost done reading your book I bought. It is awesome. I am going to drop a nice big review on Amazon for you when I'm done.
Love ya lots my friend.
Cecilia
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You are so kind...I was wondering how you would like the book. It was the beginning of this journey and I think the characters have grown, but I do like where they started.Thanks so much. Love ya, Carol
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Carol,
you're welcome my friend
Cecilia
Comment from Tim Margetts
Excellent, and I am still chuckling.
I love the way you worked this and imagine you had just as much fun writing it.
At least Rebecca is open to the idea of ghosts now so it opens the way for a relationship with her own ancestor.
Tim x
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Excellent, and I am still chuckling.
I love the way you worked this and imagine you had just as much fun writing it.
At least Rebecca is open to the idea of ghosts now so it opens the way for a relationship with her own ancestor.
Tim x
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Someone, please remind me where my brain was when I decided to write a story and visit my awesome great-granddaughters, who put the "Energizer Bunny" to shame with their activities and everything else. I'm trying to write, enjoy, review, enjoy, cook, enjoy, and clean. Oh yeah, did I mention I enjoy them as much as possible? It's been fun but a stretch for this old lady. Thanks so much for sticking with me. Forgive my tardiness.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Het Lass,
You are almost up to the point I am at in my writing. Once that catch up happens you will have to manage on 3 to 4 chapters a week as thats my rate of writing.
We all have lives beyond the pen or keyboard so fret not and enjoy this precious time with your family
Tim x