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Home is where the heart is - is true.

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Comment from godlucifer
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a home is a man's castle. a man's castle is his pride. i always thought a home tell the character of a man. your poem was written with a talent. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Hi G. Lucifer,
    I like your direct answers and statements! Refreshing actually... thank you for your thoughts :-)

    Senyai
Comment from Begin Again
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Home is where the heart is and all the love that lives or once lived there remains in every corner of it. At times when all alone, if I close my eyes and let the love seep into my soul, I remember that love still remains.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from jake cosmos aller
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I love the ghostly image. I would have played on that theme -but that would be a different poem entirely. How did you generate the image? was it an AI image?

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from LJbutterfly
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Home is where the love is. Even if you live alone, it's the place you go to find comfort and safety. It's where you can relax and reflect. Your poem thoughtfully expresses truth about your choice of things to surround yourself with in your home. As we look around our home, it reveals who we really are. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is an interesting poem. How true your words are. I enjoyed this poem. The picture is a good choice for your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from shad blunt
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Love words less spoken through this style of writing. You have captured a whole story in three lines. My only hope that I may not find this fate to rest alone by a fire. Love the poem, makes you reflect on things to come, may our hearts fly high to achieve the adventures and the fate with love to call home where we find peace to lie down before we sleep

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from TPAC
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Yip! This statement is about the bottom fact prevailing this matter, illustrating the dwellers gathered interests throughout time: given intentions believed with those moments. All views are given in my view.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You make a good point in your poem about
what a home is with effective imagery.
-I agree about it reflecting on who lives there
and what they are like, although they
could also surprise you.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I guess even ghosts go back to their favorite home to live out their life ... um, their afterlife. With coffee:-)

I don't read a lot of poetry, but your picture drew me in. The words of your poem are so true - when I walk into someone's home for the first time, I always look around to see what kind of person they really are.

I think this is a lovely entry for the contest. Good luck!

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024

Comment from Sanku
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I love the picture of the smug casper with his cup of hot tea(or coffee) and enjoying the warmth from an ancient fireplace.
I love to look around a house and see what I can deduce about its inhabitants...All the best for the contest

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024