Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I can see here that a lot of thought has gone into interpreting Revelations and the day of Jud(gm)ent. You write here your own version, marking the end of what's gone before and the beginning of a new kind of life. An interesting read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks for the excellent review and your comments supporting the poem. I like to be interesting. Once again I can say I got people thinking, and that is a success to me. estory

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You did an excellent job keeping us a little off balance. Revelations is a very hard book to completely understand, but you did a good job interrupting this part of it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks for the excellent review and your perspective on the poem and all your encouraging comments. Once again I got people thinking, and that is a success to me. estory