June's Purple Lily
5-7-5 haiku28 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed the personification of the purple lily. A very good haiku, five-seven-five for the contest. I too have an entry in the contest: "Lamentations" may we both do well.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed the personification of the purple lily. A very good haiku, five-seven-five for the contest. I too have an entry in the contest: "Lamentations" may we both do well.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments and review today.
Comment from Jacob1395
This immediately conjured up images in my mind of spring awakening as I read this piece, I loved the image of the flower waiting to hear the robins song, I thought that was really well thought out. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This immediately conjured up images in my mind of spring awakening as I read this piece, I loved the image of the flower waiting to hear the robins song, I thought that was really well thought out. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love spring, except for allergies that come with it.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your personification of the purple Peruvian lily. Instead of heliotropism, the lily responds to the robin's song. And the lily in the picture seems to be "all ears." Lol. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I like your personification of the purple Peruvian lily. Instead of heliotropism, the lily responds to the robin's song. And the lily in the picture seems to be "all ears." Lol. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your super review.
Comment from Nicki.B
What a beautiful flower. And a gorgeous scenic haiku! Thanks for the clarification on June whilst I would hope readers wouldnt mistake you are talking to the latter ha!
Well done a great contender for the contest, good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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What a beautiful flower. And a gorgeous scenic haiku! Thanks for the clarification on June whilst I would hope readers wouldnt mistake you are talking to the latter ha!
Well done a great contender for the contest, good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review and well wishes!
Comment from forestport12
Lovely personification by using face as a way to give it more human quality and deeper sense of living. Also liked it turns naturally toward the vitamins and sun etc.. Illustration emotions much like us.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Lovely personification by using face as a way to give it more human quality and deeper sense of living. Also liked it turns naturally toward the vitamins and sun etc.. Illustration emotions much like us.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your perceptive comments in your review today.
Comment from Gunner Lil
A very lovely photograph of lily used for this short poem.
Short but sweet about the flower waiting for the robins to arrive.
An easy read.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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A very lovely photograph of lily used for this short poem.
Short but sweet about the flower waiting for the robins to arrive.
An easy read.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great review. I always try to make everything I write as comprehensible as possible, ha ha.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A glorious visual, Christie, with the purple lily heralding (in hope) the approach of summer and the robin's delightful song. Lovely imagery in the second line and an enjoyable, optimistic theme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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A glorious visual, Christie, with the purple lily heralding (in hope) the approach of summer and the robin's delightful song. Lovely imagery in the second line and an enjoyable, optimistic theme. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. I really enjoyed this Haiku. The personification of the flower turning its face toward the sound of the robin was so nice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. I really enjoyed this Haiku. The personification of the flower turning its face toward the sound of the robin was so nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for such a nice review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Chystie,
This is a beautiful photo of a purple lily. I have never seen this color of lily before. I think the blooming of any flower brings hope of Spring as does the robin's song.
Congrats on winning the contest. in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S In case I didn't tell you, I have just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". I have a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile bio page.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hi Chystie,
This is a beautiful photo of a purple lily. I have never seen this color of lily before. I think the blooming of any flower brings hope of Spring as does the robin's song.
Congrats on winning the contest. in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S In case I didn't tell you, I have just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". I have a link to it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile bio page.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your great comments today.
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No problem, Crystie.
Joan
P S If I haven't told you yet, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to the book on Amazon at the end of my profile page.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Crystie.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good use of personification and
alliteration in line two.
-A good concluding line showing
how it enjoys the robin's song.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Crystie.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good use of personification and
alliteration in line two.
-A good concluding line showing
how it enjoys the robin's song.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your detailed review.
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You are very welcome.