Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a model of a writer you are! I'm glad that you keep writing everyday and I'm glad you are sharing your poetic form of the Octastich! There is a quiet joy to be able to express our souls through art!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. Your kind words mean a lot to me.

Love

Marival ❤️

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Gypsy,

What a beautiful poem you wrote. I love it. You used your imagination and busted that poem out. The picture you chose is awesome and it compliments the poem.

Great job

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 18-Nov-2024

You're welcome

Cecilia

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

what a beautiful form and enchanting employment of it for us here, Gypsy -- love the feeling of anticipation and even accomplishment that this one conjures... Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy