Dodie Rae
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Diversion"A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Dodie Rae's mom is cleared of this latest wolf attack. I am very curious what's going on now. This is another very good write.
"She doesn't have any family here!" She said raising her voice. (she said....)
They sprang from the couch, giving the wolf a full view of the scream fest on the big screen. (But Martin wasn't abusing his wife, the screams came from the TV.)
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Dodie Rae's mom is cleared of this latest wolf attack. I am very curious what's going on now. This is another very good write.
"She doesn't have any family here!" She said raising her voice. (she said....)
They sprang from the couch, giving the wolf a full view of the scream fest on the big screen. (But Martin wasn't abusing his wife, the screams came from the TV.)
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Lol, I had changed that line. Before they were watching a scream fest on the big screen to mask her screams. I thought I had finished editing to full view of the scream fest playing unfolding before it.
Thank you for always being there for these catches, Barbara.
God bless,
Steve
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Got it!!!
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When Stephen King wrote, "As many peasants as they can eat," He meant to say Pheasants.
