Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Miracles - chap 13"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Wendy G
I just got chills. Alyssa, Rebecca's twin is Allie, Garth's bride. That's why he was so drawn to Rebecca, and why she had the same mannerisms. Perfect!!! Well done. Now the next step is for Matthew to recover (but remain hidden!)
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I just got chills. Alyssa, Rebecca's twin is Allie, Garth's bride. That's why he was so drawn to Rebecca, and why she had the same mannerisms. Perfect!!! Well done. Now the next step is for Matthew to recover (but remain hidden!)
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Hurrah! You figured it out! I hope I get a chance to continue writing but first I needed to at least acknowledge everyone. I can't believe so much is happening.
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I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from tfawcus
What a tangled web you weave! I haven't been doing much reviewing while preparing my latest novels for publication, and I am diving into this midstream. Nonetheless, the characters are instantly recognisable and clearly differentiated, and the plot is compelling. Bravo. All good wishes, Tony
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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What a tangled web you weave! I haven't been doing much reviewing while preparing my latest novels for publication, and I am diving into this midstream. Nonetheless, the characters are instantly recognisable and clearly differentiated, and the plot is compelling. Bravo. All good wishes, Tony
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for the stars and all your kindness. I so appreciate it. Take care!
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I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, we know it's not Matthew! Boy, that Miriam is a little mysterious. I wonder why she won't let Eleanor see Trevor, - my guess at the other presence in the house. I'm also guessing that Alyssa is Garth's Allie. Didn't they meet at a vineyard long ago?
The thing that is perplexing to me is how varied the "ghosts" are. I'm guessing that Danni is temporarily more a live human. But I don't know why Eleanor can conjure up a hot breakfast but Miriam finds her pocket empty and can't give Willow a carrot. Are there rules to types of ghosts?
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Ah, we know it's not Matthew! Boy, that Miriam is a little mysterious. I wonder why she won't let Eleanor see Trevor, - my guess at the other presence in the house. I'm also guessing that Alyssa is Garth's Allie. Didn't they meet at a vineyard long ago?
The thing that is perplexing to me is how varied the "ghosts" are. I'm guessing that Danni is temporarily more a live human. But I don't know why Eleanor can conjure up a hot breakfast but Miriam finds her pocket empty and can't give Willow a carrot. Are there rules to types of ghosts?
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Awesome memory! They did meet in the town at a coffee shop but the story took place in a vineyard. After I posted this chapter, the same thought came to mind about the carrot... Maybe their are rules? LOL Thanks so much.....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a fabulous chapter, Carol! I hope Miriam will reveal the fact that she has a wounded man in her home. Then at least Jenna will be happy for a while. Well done my friend. :)) Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
I opened a video on my laptop and discovered too late that it was a scam. It totally messed it up. I couldn't get into it. I quickly turned it off and took it too a computer expert I know and he has had it since Wednesday afternoon. He said they've really messed it up. It's full of viruses! I'm on my iPad now, which is not easy to use. I hope he can fix it for me. I'll let you know if it is.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter! Xxxxx
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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That was a fabulous chapter, Carol! I hope Miriam will reveal the fact that she has a wounded man in her home. Then at least Jenna will be happy for a while. Well done my friend. :)) Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
I opened a video on my laptop and discovered too late that it was a scam. It totally messed it up. I couldn't get into it. I quickly turned it off and took it too a computer expert I know and he has had it since Wednesday afternoon. He said they've really messed it up. It's full of viruses! I'm on my iPad now, which is not easy to use. I hope he can fix it for me. I'll let you know if it is.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter! Xxxxx
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Who is the woman in the photo? After several novels, you have now become a master of suspense. Every chapter has something to ponder.
I'm glad Miriam had a heart-to-heart talk about her past, with Eleanor, even though she won't admit Matthew is in her care. Another mystery. We'll find out why later. I don't remember mention of another person in the car with Matthew, so we must wait to find out who it is.
Way to go Carol.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Who is the woman in the photo? After several novels, you have now become a master of suspense. Every chapter has something to ponder.
I'm glad Miriam had a heart-to-heart talk about her past, with Eleanor, even though she won't admit Matthew is in her care. Another mystery. We'll find out why later. I don't remember mention of another person in the car with Matthew, so we must wait to find out who it is.
Way to go Carol.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Think back to the fight at the bar and then the guy helping Bruiser dump Donatelli. Bruiser hit the other guy over the head, shoved him in Donatelli's car and sent it over the edge of the cliff. Of course he drowned. Now they will discover that Donatelli had a fight with this guy and he will be charged with murder. And you should know who the woman is but I'm not teling you...you'll know soon enough. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, this house sounds so beautiful inside. You've described the furnishings well. It sounds like Rebecca is warming up to it a bit. I'm glad they found Matthew's car, and I hope Eleanor finds Matthew soon. Good chapter!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Wow, this house sounds so beautiful inside. You've described the furnishings well. It sounds like Rebecca is warming up to it a bit. I'm glad they found Matthew's car, and I hope Eleanor finds Matthew soon. Good chapter!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I hope she does too because he's going to have some rough guys after him real soon. And Garth's going to get blown out of the water and sideways at the same time. Hang on!
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks for the hints at what's coming! I'm ready. LOL. Hugs!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
You are my favorite author. This story is so good and holds the readers attention to the end. You also leave your reader wanting more. I guess if we didn't it wouldn't be a good story.
Great job and keep it coming.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Carol,
You are my favorite author. This story is so good and holds the readers attention to the end. You also leave your reader wanting more. I guess if we didn't it wouldn't be a good story.
Great job and keep it coming.
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I'm so far behind again but I just had to get a story out there today and I am thrilled to see that it was worth it. Thank you for the stars but most of all for your comments. I love it when someone really loves my stories like I do. Thank you so much. Hang on! Because the rides about to get real bumpy again.
Smiles, Carol
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Alright my friend I'm holding on for the next ride. I wish I could write like you. My stories fall flat. I know you have had some time at it.
I know how it is trying to stay up on everything. It's a wonder you can even write.
Cecilia
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I'm leaving on a three week trip on Saturday.... which I am still going to try and write.... and I had my handicapped son busy with hospital tests and now I have to cook and freeze him enough lunches and dinners for the time I am gone, plus get ready to go..... Oh so much fun! Thanks for all the encouragement and support.
Love ya, Carol
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how this scene gradually unfolds. I was drawn into the mysteries surrounding the mansion. The way Miriam's past is revealed with such raw emotion is powerful! Her heartbreaking story hits hard. I also loved the way you created tension - especially when Eleanor senses something more is going on. Your writing kept me hooked. Great work!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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I really enjoyed how this scene gradually unfolds. I was drawn into the mysteries surrounding the mansion. The way Miriam's past is revealed with such raw emotion is powerful! Her heartbreaking story hits hard. I also loved the way you created tension - especially when Eleanor senses something more is going on. Your writing kept me hooked. Great work!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Oh, you have no idea how much your review means to me. I have been having a difficult day and wanted to get the story out there again...I was afraid I might have rushed it. You loving it made my day! Thank you so much... I so appreciate the comments and the stars.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It is not Matthew. I can't wait until the discover where Matthew is, although he doesn't know he's Matthew. I'm sure Eleanor will quickly put these pieces together. I do like this story.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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It is not Matthew. I can't wait until the discover where Matthew is, although he doesn't know he's Matthew. I'm sure Eleanor will quickly put these pieces together. I do like this story.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Hey, Barbara...I am so far behind but I am working on it. This was a tough one to write so I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Things are about to get bumpy though. Hang on!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
Indeed, it is a well received story that you have written here if I was very well when it is read aloud your paragraph at your punctuation and everything about this wonderfully done. Thank you so much for sharing. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Indeed, it is a well received story that you have written here if I was very well when it is read aloud your paragraph at your punctuation and everything about this wonderfully done. Thank you so much for sharing. Patricia.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading two chapters in a row...Lots to read, but greatly appreciated. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol