To loan the next hour
A poem16 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
So true, my wise and talented brother. It is a fundamental truth that help me so much. Today is the only day I have. Appreciate it, use it, glorify God in it. We are truly in the last hour of mankind as I sense our departure is near, as well as the rise of the antichrist. There's a lot in the wee poem. Thank you!
Sending you my very best,
Sal Xo
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So true, my wise and talented brother. It is a fundamental truth that help me so much. Today is the only day I have. Appreciate it, use it, glorify God in it. We are truly in the last hour of mankind as I sense our departure is near, as well as the rise of the antichrist. There's a lot in the wee poem. Thank you!
Sending you my very best,
Sal Xo
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
So well writtten! Lines like "one can't possess tomorrow" and "your next you may just borrow" make the message feel almost urgent. As if reminding us to cherish each moment as it comes. Lovely poem!
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So well writtten! Lines like "one can't possess tomorrow" and "your next you may just borrow" make the message feel almost urgent. As if reminding us to cherish each moment as it comes. Lovely poem!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
I try to live from the idea.
Learn from yesterday,
Live for today,
Hope for tomorrow.
Your poem captures this philosophy very nicely.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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I try to live from the idea.
Learn from yesterday,
Live for today,
Hope for tomorrow.
Your poem captures this philosophy very nicely.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interesting caption that creates strong imagery. Even now, the death of Two- pac continues to profound many, but your words show the importance of each day as it it our last. We can do so by making the present meaningful.God gives us ways of doing this in His word.
RJ
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Interesting caption that creates strong imagery. Even now, the death of Two- pac continues to profound many, but your words show the importance of each day as it it our last. We can do so by making the present meaningful.God gives us ways of doing this in His word.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I'm still trying to figure out why you used a picture of Tupac. I hope you're not insinuating that he is one of "many" antichrists.
Your words lead my mind back to the old saying, "We're living on borrowed time."
Thank you for the lesson from 1John.
xo
Pam
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I'm still trying to figure out why you used a picture of Tupac. I hope you're not insinuating that he is one of "many" antichrists.
Your words lead my mind back to the old saying, "We're living on borrowed time."
Thank you for the lesson from 1John.
xo
Pam
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Sallyo
Neatly turned, as ever, and this time succinct as well. This is the kind of aphorism (if that's the term) I'd expect to find gracing a tombstone or one of those illuminated manuscripts.
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Neatly turned, as ever, and this time succinct as well. This is the kind of aphorism (if that's the term) I'd expect to find gracing a tombstone or one of those illuminated manuscripts.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2024