Miracles
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Comment from Carol Clark2
It's interesting that you have Eleanor sensing and feeling so many different things, especially sensing that Miriam's hand had touched Donatelli, and then sensing his presence nearby. Good chapter, a bit eerie though. Hugs & blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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It's interesting that you have Eleanor sensing and feeling so many different things, especially sensing that Miriam's hand had touched Donatelli, and then sensing his presence nearby. Good chapter, a bit eerie though. Hugs & blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Excuse the cut and paste...
I'm traveling to North Carolina to spend some time with my Great Granddaughters (and enjoy Keyanna's national soccer tournament). It's like a whirlwind at the moment, but I do appreciate your time and especially your enjoyment of my story. Hope to get back to it soon. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
How interesting you've managed to join the the afterlife with the present, almost naturally, as if they belong together, and certainly the coincidence with property that Rebecca has inherited, well done, I'm sure Eleanor will right the wrong with poor Crydtal, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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How interesting you've managed to join the the afterlife with the present, almost naturally, as if they belong together, and certainly the coincidence with property that Rebecca has inherited, well done, I'm sure Eleanor will right the wrong with poor Crydtal, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
My friend your chapters are always so intriguing and you like to leave me on the edge wanting more. I wonder why if Eleanor is a ghost she can't go snooping to find Donatelli. It's all part of the mystery though I suppose. You don't want to give up the goods to soon.
Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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My friend your chapters are always so intriguing and you like to leave me on the edge wanting more. I wonder why if Eleanor is a ghost she can't go snooping to find Donatelli. It's all part of the mystery though I suppose. You don't want to give up the goods to soon.
Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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She can but currently he doesn't know who he is so he can't send vibes to her. She felt the ones in the places he had been...the bar with his blood on the rock and on Miriam's hand but she can't pin point where he is...until he knows who he is.
Smiles, Carol
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Aah my friend that makes total sense. Me wonders how long you are going to keep him from knowing who he is???
Cecilia
Comment from LJbutterfly
I dare not think about what Miriam will do when Rebecca claims the house. I have no doubt that Eleanor will discover where Matthew is, but what will Matthew do after Eleanor finds him? I'm glad I don't have to figure any of this out. All I have to do is sit back and watch you weave creative twists and turns and cliff hangers in and out, as a master story-teller.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I dare not think about what Miriam will do when Rebecca claims the house. I have no doubt that Eleanor will discover where Matthew is, but what will Matthew do after Eleanor finds him? I'm glad I don't have to figure any of this out. All I have to do is sit back and watch you weave creative twists and turns and cliff hangers in and out, as a master story-teller.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've often wondered what it would be like to see things in the past or the future, through walls, or into the minds of others. Then, just the thought frightens the heck out of me. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I've often wondered what it would be like to see things in the past or the future, through walls, or into the minds of others. Then, just the thought frightens the heck out of me. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Eleanor has sort of found Matthew. At least she knows where he's at. This is a good write. I can't wait to read more and also discover exactly what happened to Trevor and Miriam. I also want to know for sure who's the father of Jenna's baby.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Eleanor has sort of found Matthew. At least she knows where he's at. This is a good write. I can't wait to read more and also discover exactly what happened to Trevor and Miriam. I also want to know for sure who's the father of Jenna's baby.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
He must be in that house. She is the ghost who is looking after Matthew, isn't she? He's going to wonder if there any people alive with all these ghost around him. Eleanor must find him, he's in a lot of trouble, and he also needs to know there is nothing going on between Garth and Jenna. What a fabulous job you're doing, my clever friend. Love you lots. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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He must be in that house. She is the ghost who is looking after Matthew, isn't she? He's going to wonder if there any people alive with all these ghost around him. Eleanor must find him, he's in a lot of trouble, and he also needs to know there is nothing going on between Garth and Jenna. What a fabulous job you're doing, my clever friend. Love you lots. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I'm not sure Donatelli even realizes that Miriam is a ghost yet...maybe as his mind settles down he'll pick up on it. He's in a great deal of trouble thanks to Doyle...a wicked man.
Love you, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Not fair. You left me hanging again! That is one thing I really don't like about reading a chapter at a time, having to wait for the next one. I wouldn't change a thing. Write fast! Esther
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Not fair. You left me hanging again! That is one thing I really don't like about reading a chapter at a time, having to wait for the next one. I wouldn't change a thing. Write fast! Esther
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
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No worries. Taking a break myself.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really loved how you brought the tension to life in this chapter. The way you described Eleanor's growing sense of urgency worked so well.
Miriam's story and the tension in her brief interaction with Eleanor left me wanting to know more. I could feel Eleanor's determination at the end! You've set up a mystery! I can't wait to see where it leads!
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I really loved how you brought the tension to life in this chapter. The way you described Eleanor's growing sense of urgency worked so well.
Miriam's story and the tension in her brief interaction with Eleanor left me wanting to know more. I could feel Eleanor's determination at the end! You've set up a mystery! I can't wait to see where it leads!
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Argh.
Too many questions left unanswered... so far.
But my man question is, I know Eleanor recognised that Miriam is a ghost but why didn't the spirit recognise the same in her. Or did I miss something :o
I love the way this is building up, The scene with crystal was raw and brutal. I hate arseholes like that.
Continue bringing me more of your raw emotion. I need it in my life.
Tim x
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Argh.
Too many questions left unanswered... so far.
But my man question is, I know Eleanor recognised that Miriam is a ghost but why didn't the spirit recognise the same in her. Or did I miss something :o
I love the way this is building up, The scene with crystal was raw and brutal. I hate arseholes like that.
Continue bringing me more of your raw emotion. I need it in my life.
Tim x
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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i am so far behind and I apologize. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I do so appreciate it and all the support.
Smiles, Carol