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Dodie Rae

Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "What to do?"
A young woman unwilling to submit to abuse.

12 total reviews 
Comment from GWHARGIS
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

So, now Bae Lynn is getting some unwanted attention . Dodie Rae is trying to get all the loose ends tied up and that just might backfire. I liked the interaction with Officer Carrey. This was a great chapter that gives the reader a lot to think about. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Gretchen, for the beautiful six stars. There is a lot of conflict in this chapter, but Dodie Rae has a plan to cause more, despite Bay Lynn's request.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Excellent
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I wondered if Bay Lynn's car at the side of the road would be caught by the police and if it could mean trouble for her. At least Dodie Rae may have the heat off of her for a bit. Great chapter.

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 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Yeah! It was just a matter of time, but these girls had it all figured out. Or so it seems. Thank you, Marilyn, for this incredible review, my friend.
    God bless,
    Steve