Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Your free verse poetry certainly exemplifies the path and the pattern of summer thunderstorm. I've been in thunderstorms that turned into tornadoes. They're not as much fun. This is a very well-done free verse poem.
Robert

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Robert,

Thank you for your kind review.

Cecilia

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 11-Nov-2024

You're welcome

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

It's always a delight when the storm passes, cleansing the atmosphere so that the sun can peek out and survey the scene. Your free rhyming verse vividly builds up this weather feature of thunder, releasing its rainfall in torrents before coming to its subdued and peaceful conclusion. Well done, Cecilia. Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Hi Debbie,

Thank you for your kind review. It means a lot coming from you.

Cecilia

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Summer thunderstorms can be very devastating to approach and also devastating to us as we fear the worst from them. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a good day and may God bless you. Patricia.A

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Patricia,

Thank you for the kind review.

Cecilia

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love thunderstorms, like a child, I snuggle under the bedclothes as I feel safe and laugh, I don't think I've felt fright, but some cyclones they get in the eastern states doesn't sound good, our weather is pretty stable here. Beautifully written Cecilia, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Roy,

Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.

Cecilia

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written free form poem about summer thunderstorms. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Teri,

Thank you for the kind review.

Cecilia

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

There was a time in my youth that I loved the sound of thunder and lightning, but now I southern California we do not get much of that or twister either. I enjoyed the flow of your poem.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

DonandVicki,

Thank you for the kind review. l love a good thunderstorm. Most of the tornados stay north of us in Oklahoma, which I'm thankful for.

Cecilia

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You revealed here your feelings as the storm hits, the anticipation of the storm when the lightning strikes and then the thunder and torrential rain. I love a good storm and you brought the drama in this poem Cecilia.

Adjustment here:
(Jagged (lightnning) lights up the sky)

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you for the kind review and catching the error. I will fix it promptly.

Cecilia

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Wow! It felt like I was there, and it was happening. I suppose living in tornado alley exposes you to lots of threatening storms, hopefully not directly. I like that the ending says the storm passed, leaving the sun peeking through the clouds. Great job!

The sunshine peaks through the clouds (peeks)

Back to writing....
Smiles and hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Carol,

Thank you my friend for the kind review and catching that error. I really appreciate it.

Cecilia

reply by Begin Again on 10-Nov-2024

No problem at all.

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Have a Blessed day my friend. You can't write that next chapter goofing off with me :)

Cecilia

reply by Begin Again on 10-Nov-2024

But I enjoyed it!