A Fox's Time
The concept of time15 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
Lovely rhyming poem. I like your concept. Man follows time and animal follow senses. Thanks for sharing and please take care. Hopefully, a wonderful day awaits you.
Regards
Barry Penfold
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Lovely rhyming poem. I like your concept. Man follows time and animal follow senses. Thanks for sharing and please take care. Hopefully, a wonderful day awaits you.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
HI Pam,
This is a well written poem about time according to animals and according to humans. I like the simplicity of nature's time. Just eat sleep and play.
Time, or lack of it, seems to bring us stress. I am glad that the dogs keep the chickens safe. But I don't want the fox family to starve either.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the day and week.
Joan
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HI Pam,
This is a well written poem about time according to animals and according to humans. I like the simplicity of nature's time. Just eat sleep and play.
Time, or lack of it, seems to bring us stress. I am glad that the dogs keep the chickens safe. But I don't want the fox family to starve either.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very cute and creative story/poem. I do hope you post the other poem you wrote in your younger years. I know they'll be fun to read. I can't wait.
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This is a very cute and creative story/poem. I do hope you post the other poem you wrote in your younger years. I know they'll be fun to read. I can't wait.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Fox's Time, presented with ten AABB-rhymed quatrains, compares in part the illusion of time which to men makes sense, and to the creatures who feed constantly a matter of opportunity.
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This poem, A Fox's Time, presented with ten AABB-rhymed quatrains, compares in part the illusion of time which to men makes sense, and to the creatures who feed constantly a matter of opportunity.
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Foxes are a slide creatures and they do in veg the coops of chickens at night. So the farmers are very careful to lock the chickens up in such a way that the fox cannot get in. I appreciate your poem and your outlook. Patricia.
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Foxes are a slide creatures and they do in veg the coops of chickens at night. So the farmers are very careful to lock the chickens up in such a way that the fox cannot get in. I appreciate your poem and your outlook. Patricia.
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024