Miracles
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! I didn't want to stop reading. Garth forces Jenna to admit she is pregnant. Eleanor is upset because neither Garth or Jenna told her, so she disappears.
Now we need to know who was driving the Land Rover and what his intentions were, and how Garth and Tango knew to follow him.
Welcome new ghost, Miranda (or Miriam as she is named in the story). I'm glad she lived near the lake so she and Willow could save Matthew. I'm so ready for Chapter 8.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Wow! I didn't want to stop reading. Garth forces Jenna to admit she is pregnant. Eleanor is upset because neither Garth or Jenna told her, so she disappears.
Now we need to know who was driving the Land Rover and what his intentions were, and how Garth and Tango knew to follow him.
Welcome new ghost, Miranda (or Miriam as she is named in the story). I'm glad she lived near the lake so she and Willow could save Matthew. I'm so ready for Chapter 8.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from karenina
Oh boy... This is getting complicated! Is it Donatelli being nursed back to health, or a stand-in? Why didn't Eleanor stay for moral support and questions to be answered? Garth is being especially sensitive and supportive of Jenna... I'm wondering if this is the budding romance and Donatelli was right in his instincts.
Wow... Lots to ponder. Never a dull moment when you're writing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Oh boy... This is getting complicated! Is it Donatelli being nursed back to health, or a stand-in? Why didn't Eleanor stay for moral support and questions to be answered? Garth is being especially sensitive and supportive of Jenna... I'm wondering if this is the budding romance and Donatelli was right in his instincts.
Wow... Lots to ponder. Never a dull moment when you're writing!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
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Any thank you is a welcome thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the very best with this book. May God bless you.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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This is very nicely written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the very best with this book. May God bless you.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from BethShelby
So now Eleanor knows Jenna is pregnant. She didn't even ask for details. I was surprised to learn Garth was attracted to Eleanor although she is ghost. I thought Eleanor love was a ghost as well. In the last story didn't she keep going back somewhere to be with him? I must have missed something. Now we have another ghost name Willow who was hanged for something she didn't do. I'm not sure who she is trying to nurse back to life other than he is wearing a badge I'll try to catch up.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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So now Eleanor knows Jenna is pregnant. She didn't even ask for details. I was surprised to learn Garth was attracted to Eleanor although she is ghost. I thought Eleanor love was a ghost as well. In the last story didn't she keep going back somewhere to be with him? I must have missed something. Now we have another ghost name Willow who was hanged for something she didn't do. I'm not sure who she is trying to nurse back to life other than he is wearing a badge I'll try to catch up.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from royowen
It must be Donatello that is the injured, but barely living man, another victim of Doyle's influence, this us amazing Carol, how you keep up with all the writing you're doing I don't know, but I guess you seem to be super charged, Jenna will have to spill the beans, what a tangle, well done My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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It must be Donatello that is the injured, but barely living man, another victim of Doyle's influence, this us amazing Carol, how you keep up with all the writing you're doing I don't know, but I guess you seem to be super charged, Jenna will have to spill the beans, what a tangle, well done My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Rooster strutting across the hen house" makes my chin stick out and arms go to flapping like wings automatically. Now, Donatelli just needs to get his groove on and grow up. :-) Thanks for sharing.
. . . green Land Rover, not that (that) helps much."
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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"Rooster strutting across the hen house" makes my chin stick out and arms go to flapping like wings automatically. Now, Donatelli just needs to get his groove on and grow up. :-) Thanks for sharing.
. . . green Land Rover, not that (that) helps much."
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That has to be Matthew. Doyle wanted him dead and framed. Clever. But he didn't bank on Mirium being there and saving him. This is really exciting, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I think Eleanor should have waited to listen to her daughter. All her anger has done is to made poor Jenna feel even worse. I'm afraid Eleanor has been a little selfish here. But I guess we all over-react sometimes. Well done, my friend. You are amazing. :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
In your list of characters you have MIranda as a ghost from long ago, should it be Mirium? :)) xx
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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That has to be Matthew. Doyle wanted him dead and framed. Clever. But he didn't bank on Mirium being there and saving him. This is really exciting, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I think Eleanor should have waited to listen to her daughter. All her anger has done is to made poor Jenna feel even worse. I'm afraid Eleanor has been a little selfish here. But I guess we all over-react sometimes. Well done, my friend. You are amazing. :)) Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
In your list of characters you have MIranda as a ghost from long ago, should it be Mirium? :)) xx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I take it this man is Matthew, isn't he. I can't wait to read more. Eleanor should have realized Garth wouldn't keep something from her. He just found out and made Jenna tell her.
"Jenna, I'm happy you are here, but if it's too much --" (dialogue, so probably 'you're here.)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I take it this man is Matthew, isn't he. I can't wait to read more. Eleanor should have realized Garth wouldn't keep something from her. He just found out and made Jenna tell her.
"Jenna, I'm happy you are here, but if it's too much --" (dialogue, so probably 'you're here.)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Wow! Carol, you are really packing in the intrigue and mystery this time! And now a brand new ghost is coming to the party? WWOOHHOOOO You're getting very good at these cliff hangers lol
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Wow! Carol, you are really packing in the intrigue and mystery this time! And now a brand new ghost is coming to the party? WWOOHHOOOO You're getting very good at these cliff hangers lol
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, you left us hanging in suspense with this chapter ending, my friend. I'm wondering whom Miriam has rescued, wearing a badge. I'm guessing it's Donatelli. Doyle is apparently responsible for injuring his partner, placing him in the car, and sending it over the cliff. That man is pure evil.
Great chapter! Carol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Wow, you left us hanging in suspense with this chapter ending, my friend. I'm wondering whom Miriam has rescued, wearing a badge. I'm guessing it's Donatelli. Doyle is apparently responsible for injuring his partner, placing him in the car, and sending it over the cliff. That man is pure evil.
Great chapter! Carol
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I so apologize for not getting to this earlier but I kept getting further and further behind. I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Smiles, Carol
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It's hard to stay on top of all the reviews and comments from readers. I appreciate that you always respond. Blessings.