Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

I love this, and very fitting for the day that in it. For the news that has come about today. The image you have used is beautiful and I'd perfect for your poem. A great entry for the contest, good luck!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thank you.

Comment from Nicole Dover

Good

I'm generally not a fan of poems this short - I think it is hard to convey any real meaning, emotion or story. I do think that this is fitting to read today given the election yesterday and current political environment.

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thank you.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This felt like a heartfelt prayer. I love the quiet strength in the plea for protection. The directness of your words works so well. This feels so honest. Very moving!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thank you

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good prayer and use of repetition
with the 'p' sound for emphasis.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thank you.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Nov-2024

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A magical picture and these few words speak volumes, I enjoyed your sweet natured poem for the contest and wish you luck with this one, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Thank you