Prayers for Wayne, Rhonda's Husband
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 " Blue Skies"Rhonda's husband had a stroke
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully heartfelt poem! I really enjoyed how you captured the difference between city and rural life. The lines about being alive with both joys and struggles is perfect! I particularly loved the warmth in your closing lines, where you remind Rhonda of the comforting presence of God - it's such a reassuring thought. Great job - Keep writing!
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What a beautifully heartfelt poem! I really enjoyed how you captured the difference between city and rural life. The lines about being alive with both joys and struggles is perfect! I particularly loved the warmth in your closing lines, where you remind Rhonda of the comforting presence of God - it's such a reassuring thought. Great job - Keep writing!
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2024