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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another fun account of such an exciting scene through the eyes of another participant... almost ready to participate in the food fight at this point! ;) Thanx for sharing you! ;)
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Another fun account of such an exciting scene through the eyes of another participant... almost ready to participate in the food fight at this point! ;) Thanx for sharing you! ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Some excellent images here, Jess, which will stick in my memory. In particular the colours of the fruit truck spill reflected in the windows and your elegant self walking in trying to channel your "I totally meant to arrive now" vice:)) Things clearly deteriorated from bad to worse then (I always say when the day starts badly it ain't gonna get any better!) That Jane Babies deserves to be whipped. How dare she injure Jim - he's my best friend too:)) A thoroughly entertaining read. Thanks Jess. Debbie
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Some excellent images here, Jess, which will stick in my memory. In particular the colours of the fruit truck spill reflected in the windows and your elegant self walking in trying to channel your "I totally meant to arrive now" vice:)) Things clearly deteriorated from bad to worse then (I always say when the day starts badly it ain't gonna get any better!) That Jane Babies deserves to be whipped. How dare she injure Jim - he's my best friend too:)) A thoroughly entertaining read. Thanks Jess. Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your version of what happened during this food fight. I have enjoyed reading every version. They're all great. I totally enjoyed Gretchen and Rachelle's story. I hope they collaborate again.
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Thank you for sharing your version of what happened during this food fight. I have enjoyed reading every version. They're all great. I totally enjoyed Gretchen and Rachelle's story. I hope they collaborate again.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Jim Wile
Awww. You stuck up for me. Thanks, Bestie!
I loved hearing about the troubles you often encounter making you late. Chickens in the driveway, huh? That's a good one. I also loved your interpretation of what you were seeing as you made your entrance--some sort of performance art, when the truth of it was just a bunch of adults acting like children.
This has been a fun romp with many funny chapters being added to this wonderful story.
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Awww. You stuck up for me. Thanks, Bestie!
I loved hearing about the troubles you often encounter making you late. Chickens in the driveway, huh? That's a good one. I also loved your interpretation of what you were seeing as you made your entrance--some sort of performance art, when the truth of it was just a bunch of adults acting like children.
This has been a fun romp with many funny chapters being added to this wonderful story.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2024