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Butterfly Family

A syllable count plan

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Comment from royowen
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Even the birds are not only bearers of seeds, but the pollinate the flowers, and also very attractive, as the lady bugs, and they actually limit the aphids which can destroy plant life. Well done, Blessings Pat, Roy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate.
reply by royowen on 31-Oct-2024
    Well done
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad that you feel peace and joy when you see the Lord's amazing creation in the beautiful butterflies! It's these connections with nature that help us when we are "weary."

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you for a very delightful review. I appreciate it very much
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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So your husband had a Fourth of July birthday, huh? That is really cool.

I love butterflies, because my mother loved butterflies, so now when one lands by me it represents her to me. Since the day that I went golfing with some friends a week after she died and a butterfly followed me around the whole eight holes and never went around the others. We knew it was God giving me that sign that she was ok.
Thanks for this absolutely beautiful and carefully thought out for syllables as well as your words of your poem. You are so very talented my sweet friend. And I hope you are feeling better since your last procedures. Love, Debi

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you for a lovely video. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Julie G1
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Well composed. This verse expresses a happy appreciation of the beauty of our natural blessings. The graphic was effective, and added to the effect. Overall, worked well for this reader.

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.