Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

There's a lot bubbling up now and Miranda is trying to keep a lid on her emotions and keep everyone safe in the process. As ever, your characters and particularly Miranda are excellently crafted to promote the plot. Thank you for sharing, Gretchen. Take care Debbie

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024

Thanks so much. There is generally a little going on in Miranda's life. Glad you liked this chapter. Gretchen

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I love Miranda argues with herself after she has already gotten involved. Still she did the right thing having the principal look into if there might be something going on. I wonder what she was able to find out.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024

Thanks so much, Beth. Goodness knows what stuff she'd get into with out her mirror self talking some sense into her. Lol. Thanks so much for this. Gretchen

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud you're certain structure your paragraph and your punctuation should all make it so that it reads very well. Have a good day Amy may God bless your week. Patricia.

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024

Thank you very much, Patricia. Appreciate the kind review. Gretchen

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

I've been keeping this six safe for Miranda! I knew she would deserve it. I do think Mirror Miranda has a point; she hasn't any real proof that nasty slimeball is a peodophile, but I bet he is!
Aaron is coming on well, doing all that research. That surprised Miranda, but he is really keen to get to the bottom of it all. Another great chapter, Gretchen. :) Sandra xx

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024

Thank you so much, Sandra. Sorry for the late reply. Busy week for me. I really appreciate this. Gretchen

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Miranda is her own worst enemy. I do hope Waylon chooses to remain with her. I'm sure Dougie is going to screw up again. I wonder if there's some connect with what Aaron discovered. It's possible.

"This is impressive Aaron. (impressive,)

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024

Thank you, Barbara. Don't know if Aaron's research will connect or not. Thanks for the edits. Gretchen

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think all of May have been the victim of hearsay, I was always good at knowing that I could take care of the problems of the world by a fictionalised version of the truth, I realised something's aren't my business. Beautifully convoluted, you nearly left me behind Gretchen, beautifully written though, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024

I do a lot of speculating. In our own imaginations we are judge and jury. Rarely privy to all the facts but so be it. Case closed. Thank you for this. Gretchen

reply by royowen on 29-Oct-2024

That's true,

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a great chapter. You used very good descriptive words and very good dialogue also. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Teri

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024

Thank you Teri. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen