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27 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
Haha! What a great ending to a bizarre story. Diversions left, right and centre. Makes me wonder if there could have really been a fanstory conference!
Just ONE SPAG early in the story.
"She's a(delete space) bout to get the horns
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Haha! What a great ending to a bizarre story. Diversions left, right and centre. Makes me wonder if there could have really been a fanstory conference!
Just ONE SPAG early in the story.
"She's a(delete space) bout to get the horns
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. Please consider adding your own spin to the story by adding a chapter. Would love to read it. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
I read Rachelle's account and had to skip a handful of other posts to get to yours. I personally hate to see good food go to waste, and I happen to love potato salad. I hope you got some before Jane's face destroyed it. This is too funny gal. You two have created one of the most interesting story lines that I've ever read. I don't know how you did it, but you both are to be applauded. It has been so much fun to read. Well done my friend.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
I read Rachelle's account and had to skip a handful of other posts to get to yours. I personally hate to see good food go to waste, and I happen to love potato salad. I hope you got some before Jane's face destroyed it. This is too funny gal. You two have created one of the most interesting story lines that I've ever read. I don't know how you did it, but you both are to be applauded. It has been so much fun to read. Well done my friend.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you. Don't worry about me, I had a stacked plate when I ducked under the table for cover. Lol. Thank you so much and please consider adding your own version to this. Thank you for the excellent review and the six. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is, really funny. Does The Tom have a sense of humor? I hope so because he comes off as a bit of a wimp who doesn't catch the humor of the situation. Rachelle, deserves an award for sticking Jane's head in the potato salad. I wonder if Jane will realize people really don't like her, or just thinks they are having fun with her.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This is, really funny. Does The Tom have a sense of humor? I hope so because he comes off as a bit of a wimp who doesn't catch the humor of the situation. Rachelle, deserves an award for sticking Jane's head in the potato salad. I wonder if Jane will realize people really don't like her, or just thinks they are having fun with her.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Jane shall remain clueless of her terrible personality. Lol. Some people are just like that. Please write your own chapter of the conference. Would love to read it. Gretchen
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
I see that in this episode Jane continues to spill her toxins on others. She should have had to take the limo and pay for it out of pocket. She doesn't seem to add much to the convention. In fact, she could really subtract a lot from the convention if she would just leave. Having dinner under the table is an interesting event. Since I got in late, I'm just trying to wrap my mind around what is happening.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I see that in this episode Jane continues to spill her toxins on others. She should have had to take the limo and pay for it out of pocket. She doesn't seem to add much to the convention. In fact, she could really subtract a lot from the convention if she would just leave. Having dinner under the table is an interesting event. Since I got in late, I'm just trying to wrap my mind around what is happening.
Robert
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Chaos. The whole trip has been a series of detours and Missteps. Jane being the worst. Lol. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Nothing can top a good old fashioned food fight except seeing Jane's face dunked in a bowl of southern potato salad!! I hope she is able to get that relish ou of her nose. Lol too much fun!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Nothing can top a good old fashioned food fight except seeing Jane's face dunked in a bowl of southern potato salad!! I hope she is able to get that relish ou of her nose. Lol too much fun!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. Please consider writing a chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
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I would love to but I am on vacation for a week and n computer. Only phone
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! You took this chapter up ten notches. "Twinsies" made me angry. A good ole food fight.
Question. I thought this meeting was a preliminary gathering before the main event. Or, is this it? I hope there's more, with many more FanStorians. Let me know in case I want to add a chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Wow! You took this chapter up ten notches. "Twinsies" made me angry. A good ole food fight.
Question. I thought this meeting was a preliminary gathering before the main event. Or, is this it? I hope there's more, with many more FanStorians. Let me know in case I want to add a chapter.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Please add a chapter. Take this to the next level. I think we have one more chapter. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
THE Tom - oh, my goodness! Out of hiding. I am sure there will be plenty of questions heading his way at this convention! Jane Babies should have known better than to trifle (ha) with Rachelle, and now it's on for one and all! Wonderful fun chapter!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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THE Tom - oh, my goodness! Out of hiding. I am sure there will be plenty of questions heading his way at this convention! Jane Babies should have known better than to trifle (ha) with Rachelle, and now it's on for one and all! Wonderful fun chapter!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I'm so glad you had fun with this. I sure hope you'll join us by writing a chapter. Thank you so much for this incredible review and extra star. Gretchen
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I have my chapter finished already! I hope you'll enjoy it.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I glance at my watch. "Time to go." I announce, grab the closest glass of champagne and pound it down. This is going to be a long night. I can feel it in my bones. A food fighterz makes things interesting try saying. Scurry to the other side of the table and watch as Jane grabs a handful of red sauced pasta and hurls it at Rachelle. Next, I see a handful of baby carrots go flying through the air. Dolly grins and next to her, Gypsy is reaching for the grated cheese. They both aim at Jane. This was fun especially when people we know are involved in it.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I glance at my watch. "Time to go." I announce, grab the closest glass of champagne and pound it down. This is going to be a long night. I can feel it in my bones. A food fighterz makes things interesting try saying. Scurry to the other side of the table and watch as Jane grabs a handful of red sauced pasta and hurls it at Rachelle. Next, I see a handful of baby carrots go flying through the air. Dolly grins and next to her, Gypsy is reaching for the grated cheese. They both aim at Jane. This was fun especially when people we know are involved in it.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Please write a chapter. This is such a fun project. Would be awesome to have a lot of chapters from others. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! This! Is! HYSTERICAL!!! Thank you for letting me have the honor of smushing her face into the potato salad...and G-d bless Dolly and Gypsy for having my back.
And you under the table, stress eating with Tom Ens!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! And you make the most of the opportunity by requesting additional stars per week!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAA!! I can SO TOTALLY see you doing that, too!!!
Great work. You have really outdone yourself (yet again.) Love it to the max!!
xoxoxxo
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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OMG!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! This! Is! HYSTERICAL!!! Thank you for letting me have the honor of smushing her face into the potato salad...and G-d bless Dolly and Gypsy for having my back.
And you under the table, stress eating with Tom Ens!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! And you make the most of the opportunity by requesting additional stars per week!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAA!! I can SO TOTALLY see you doing that, too!!!
Great work. You have really outdone yourself (yet again.) Love it to the max!!
xoxoxxo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I'm glad you liked this. I can't wait to read the other chapters. I've read Wayne and Dolly and one was hysterical and the other a nice warm hug. This experience has been a blast. Gretchen
Comment from Begin Again
The food fight was hilarious, and I couldn't stop laughing. The minute Jane Baby reappeared, there was no doubt that Rachelle's pent-up steam was about to explode. You both did an outstanding job, and I hope the follow-up stories do just as well. I know everyone on this site has outstanding imaginations, so we should be in for a lot of laughs. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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The food fight was hilarious, and I couldn't stop laughing. The minute Jane Baby reappeared, there was no doubt that Rachelle's pent-up steam was about to explode. You both did an outstanding job, and I hope the follow-up stories do just as well. I know everyone on this site has outstanding imaginations, so we should be in for a lot of laughs. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Come on, Carol. You have to write a chapter of your experience at the convention. Gretchen