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Comment from EeanBlack
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I love how so many people think that this country can be taken down so easily. The Democrats and Republicans have worked tirelessly for over 60 years to do this internally. The real power is in the Senate. Opinion, of course. You WILL NOT have a dictator or king in the US. Every president has slowly tried to center power on himself, but our system of checks and balances always prevails. And it will prevail against him. He didn't become a dictator during his last presidency and won't in January 2025. Emotions and passion should probably stay in poetry not politics. Don't get me started on his personality though. Jeezzz. With LOVE, Eean. No hate needed.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Eean, I hope you are right. It didn't happen in the last Trump's presidency but this time, The Supreme Court has given Trump the power to do anything he wants. He would be in power with no guard reals and he cannot be stopped. Have you read the Project 2025? Have you watched Trump's interviews and rallies? He is losing touch with reality. He doesn't make any sense. You can google it. Don't depend on Fox. Try neutral news like PBS American public broadcaster network. He is not the man he was in 2016. He was never a good decent man but his mind has deteriorated immensely and he is hungry for complete control of our country and our laws. Republicans have the majority of Congress and the Senate. They will do whatever trump wants.

    I pray Americans will unite and vote for Harris, I already voted.

    Thank you very much for the excellent review and feedback.

    Gypsy
reply by EeanBlack on 26-Oct-2024
    No, there will always be restrictions. Biden has those same powers, remember? I'm a Democrat, but Biden should not be able to pardon Hunter for any of his traitorous activities. Don't be blind to either side, that IS how Fascism begins. Sorry to disagree with you. This is why I don't like politics on sites like these. All I did was disagree with another person here and now we don't speak. This should only be about creative writing and poetry. Just an opinion.
Comment from Jacob1395
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I'm not American but I can't wait for the American election to be over. I really hope Trump doesn't get in again, I think it'll be seen as taking a step backwards if he does. A well written piece.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Jacob. you are lucky, American's elections this time is terrifying. So much is at stake.

    Gypsy
Comment from tfawcus
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I think anyone who has lived under a dictatorship would agree with you. It is sad that so many Americans fail to see the danger signs. How can people be so blind?

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    I agree with you. Half of our country are all in for Trump. they are truly blind.

    Thank you very much, Tony. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I suppose we all have different interpretations and yours is a very hardline here and I was rather shocked by this post. America has never had a dictator and never will. If you lived under a true dictatorship, you would never be allowed to post this poem without being arrested. Americans don't know how lucky they really are to live with freedom, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    I'm able to post this because our president is, Biden, not Trump. Trump admits in publick he will be a fascist dictator from day one. The Supreme Court has ruled that presidents have complete power, they can do anything they want.... that is a dictatorship.

    To each their own. Let's agree to disagree.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 26-Oct-2024
    I always though that Presidents had a Cabinet? They can't decide on how federal money is spent, interpret laws or choose Cabinet members, Supreme Court Justices without Senate approval. They cannot declare war either. I don't think anyone in America considers their President to be Dictator. I have never heard of such a thing before.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I desperately need a six for this one. With only two weeks left the terror in my heart is real and I appreciate anyone who stands up and tells it like it is. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for understanding and for the kind review.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
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A very astute and clever poem. It would have done well in the Political Poem contest - if people were willing to judge it on the strengthof the writing and not on their own personal political views. Thanks for sharing this impressive one. I also feel that Trump should not dare to add His slant on the the Bible and include extras along with his signature. That to me is profanity.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    I've just found out that the Trump bible special edition is $1,000! It's crazy. His supporters are naive.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😀
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Gypsy,
Sometimes people who weren't born in our country appreciate the freedoms we are afforded here.
I'm glad you have the courage to write this poem; it serves as a warning I hope people take.
I fear for our country's future.
God bless you, Gypsy. Excellent warning.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the suggestion. I hope some of his supporters change their minds.

    Thank you very much, Cindy

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A very powerful and impressive write, Gypsy, which, together with your fine notes, makes a clear statement that everyone should observe. I wondered in your notes whether it might be better to say:
Please vote as if your life (de)pended on it...
Well done on this excellent post! Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I fixed that error. Thank you very much, Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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curious- did you take the citizenship test? is it really as hard as everyone says??

yea, i am so scared he's going to wiggle back in... worst part- he will not last (mentally) another four years... i do believe vance is actually worse.

great poem!! thank you for sharing!!
shelley :)

**crossing**fingers (and toes and legs and arms and eyes LOL)***

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Yes, the 100 questions citizenship test is hard, but it's worth it.

    Thank you very much, Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Very strong words express your conversations very vividly. Your poem is well written and addresses much of the current issues facing our nation. I know that whoever wins it brings us closer to the fulfillment of God's words., this is why my conversations lie. Well presented and illustrated poem.
RJ

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you, RJ
    I voted for Harris and I believe she will be an outstanding president. She is qualified and she's a good and decent person , Trump is a bigot, rapist, lier, dictator wana be