The Faith that Enables Me
Faith for Life23 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
That's a truly beautiful poem of your testimony of faith, retracing your past experiences, and looking forward with confidence to a secure future with Him. Probably a winner. Best wishes!
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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That's a truly beautiful poem of your testimony of faith, retracing your past experiences, and looking forward with confidence to a secure future with Him. Probably a winner. Best wishes!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate you very lovely review.
Beth
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Beautiful. You did well with this. I find no fault and yes God had a purpose for your life it is why the storm never took your life. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Beautiful. You did well with this. I find no fault and yes God had a purpose for your life it is why the storm never took your life. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Chuck. I hope I haven't let God down but I often feel I have. Still, he seems to love me, since he calms my fear and comforts me. I appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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Always remember, His love is unconditional. We all sin and come short of the glory. However, we repent and He loves us just that more.
Comment from lyenochka
From all you have shared from your life, I know you are a woman of strong faith. Your mom taught you from the start and then that miracle in the tornado confirmed how God answered your prayers! Well done with your faith poem! Best wishes in the contest!
I only question "I need to know when my time comes" because I don't think you "need" to know because I know you know!
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From all you have shared from your life, I know you are a woman of strong faith. Your mom taught you from the start and then that miracle in the tornado confirmed how God answered your prayers! Well done with your faith poem! Best wishes in the contest!
I only question "I need to know when my time comes" because I don't think you "need" to know because I know you know!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I understand, and always testify that I am unsure why I remain alive when I could have easily been interred more than a few times. I end up thinking He still has something I need to do.
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I understand, and always testify that I am unsure why I remain alive when I could have easily been interred more than a few times. I end up thinking He still has something I need to do.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This delightful, rhyming verse reads fluently and sincerely. I remember the incident in question when you were picked up, I think, by a tornado and miraculously brought down unscathed.
There's only one line which stumbles a bit with the stress falling on 'my' and the last syllable of 'heartaches.' Perhaps this as a suggestion:
Throughout my life I've felt (H)is love(,)
His strength to help my heartaches cease.
But an excellent verse and strong contender! Well done and good luck, Beth! Debbie
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This delightful, rhyming verse reads fluently and sincerely. I remember the incident in question when you were picked up, I think, by a tornado and miraculously brought down unscathed.
There's only one line which stumbles a bit with the stress falling on 'my' and the last syllable of 'heartaches.' Perhaps this as a suggestion:
Throughout my life I've felt (H)is love(,)
His strength to help my heartaches cease.
But an excellent verse and strong contender! Well done and good luck, Beth! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
My death may be near or it may not. I do not fear when my God is in control. And when that time comes, we will be in a land much different from this one. Rebellion was taken out of it. God has great plans for us.
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My death may be near or it may not. I do not fear when my God is in control. And when that time comes, we will be in a land much different from this one. Rebellion was taken out of it. God has great plans for us.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I believe you have a winner.
I love the rhyming, the flow and the message.
Now, if I could only repeat that until I have one hundred and fifty characters to make a legal review.
Good luck in the contest.
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I believe you have a winner.
I love the rhyming, the flow and the message.
Now, if I could only repeat that until I have one hundred and fifty characters to make a legal review.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this supportive and guiding poem as we rely on our faith to give us the confidence to live another day and triumph over our problems, a fine poem Beth, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed this supportive and guiding poem as we rely on our faith to give us the confidence to live another day and triumph over our problems, a fine poem Beth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
"(snd) day by day"
Excellent poem. I love the sound. Good rhymes and meter that are not forced. The Faith theme is perfect.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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"(snd) day by day"
Excellent poem. I love the sound. Good rhymes and meter that are not forced. The Faith theme is perfect.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this faith contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, it's our parents who plant the seed, and it's God who waters it. It's us who eventually accepts God. Good luck with the contest.
snd day by day I understood (and??)
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Thank you for sharing this faith contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, it's our parents who plant the seed, and it's God who waters it. It's us who eventually accepts God. Good luck with the contest.
snd day by day I understood (and??)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024