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Brain Power

A flash - A good theory

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I've always thought that the idea of memory in anything whether it's a mattress on mattress top or shoes was kind of odd. People actually think it's going to help them remember.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Liz O'Neill on 26-Oct-2024
    But you have your whereabouts in your writing. I've been so stressed about my brother but there are words that are like simple labels of something that I have forgotten
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Haha! That's a good idea...memory foam in every room so all I have to do is step in the shoes and let them remind me of what I came in the room for. Cute story. Wish it were possible.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
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Heh heh, I like this, having one's memory being stirred by strategically placed shoes, it's like tying a shoestring around one's finger and trying to remember why it's there, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by royowen on 26-Oct-2024
    You're better than me dear girl, and it's great what you do.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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HAHAHA! I need a few pairs of those shoes also! And maybe a whole bed of that memory foam would help! This is a cute story, with a bit of a surprise ending. I enjoyed it. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 26-Oct-2024
    I managed to delete the section of a study guide I had just written. You're not alone, my friend!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I have a pad of paper in my purse, and in every room in the house. I make a million lists. I jot down everything. The other day I was going to the kitchen to make a gallon of tea, In those four steps, I forgot why I was in the kitchen. So while I waited for my memory to come back I made tea. The memory came back, it usually does, but it is no longer immediate. It is a process. Karen

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Carol, excellent flash story. I like that all of your story is all dialogue!
A very sweet, humorous story. Nice twist at the end.
Best wishes,
Carol,
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile with your humour here and I would like a pair of those memory foam shoes to help me remember! Ha ha ha.

Just one adjustment for this line:
(To make (your) feet feel good).

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Wouldn't it be nice if they memory foam worked that way? I'd have a pair in every room, too. LOl Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading. You do a good job with these short posts.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    thanks, Barbara! they are a lot of fun to write but it's hard to come up with new ideas. Once I get an idea I can write it. Appreciate the review. And I would like several pairs of them too!
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from pome lover
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well, daughter, who's to say they won't? Faith in memory foam is essential!
Faith in memory anything, and if it's comfortable, too, well, then!
Cute flash story! Novel idea :)
Katarine

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    Wouldn't it be wonderful? Just imagine how much time and wasted energy it would save if a pair of shoes would walk you over to what you were suppose t be remembering and tell you to get it. Awesome! LOl
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by pome lover on 23-Oct-2024
    shoependous!! ho ho
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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LOL ok, Carol. This one is a favorite of mine plus I want the name of the store that sells them because I need 10 pair. Humorous and cute! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    Me too! I want to be first in line and buy extras.... thanks so much for the review and for enjoying this one. I've got to stop writing these and get back to the other story... it needs to wap up so I can start the Eleanor sequel. Busy! Busy! LOL
    Smiles, Carol