Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is a beautiful fantasy birthday tribute to our beloved Debi. She gives so much to others and is a blessing to this site. Thank you for creating a magical place where music and imagination hang out. It sounds so peaceful to visualize.

Happy Birthday, Dear Debi. You have been such a special friend to me. I'm glad I came to know you. I hope your day is filled with only things that make you happy. I wish you peace, joy, and healing forever.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi Lorraine, thank you so much for the review and for comments to Debi! She does so much for everyone else!!

I'm glad it was easy to visualize. That was my intent.
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

This is excellent. It's very entertaining, in addition to the fact that you do a great job of showing the story and not telling it. It is very creative. And a fun read. I'm sure glad I know ALL of those songs. :-)
Robert

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hehe, I'm glad you liked it and knew the songs. I'm sure Debi is pleased with all the responses. I know I am.
Take care,
Rhonda

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 20-Oct-2024

You are welcome.

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

This must be the third story/poem I've seen about Debi. She must have many fans and friends. What a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi William,
I appreciate the review. Yes, Debi is a special lady. She writes birthday poems for everyone who wants one and then some. She writes all kinds of poems to lift our spirits, even though she suffers from multiple health issues. She always thinks of others first.
Take care,
Rhonda

reply by F. William Lester on 19-Oct-2024

Thanks, Rhonda. I gather from all the wishes that she is special. Frank (F. William Lester is a quasi-pseudonym I use when I write)

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

What a magical place. Can you open it everytime someone has a birthday? Loved the music videos as well. A perfect party for Debi's special day. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Marilyn, I would be delighted to send the Irish Setter your way on your Birthday. I hear he works pretty cheaply. The first one was free, lol.
Thanks for the review and the well-wishes for Debi,
Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a lovely little story for Debi's birthday full of fun and good music and even a cute magical puppy. Debi does so much to make others feel they are cared for and special and I'm so happy to see so many wonderful tributes for her. They are well-deserved! Very nicely done!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thank you for the review and for the added honor to Debi on her special day, especially since she always makes ours so special.
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Aww this is beautiful, Rhonda! What a wonderful gift for our birthday girl! All so sweetly expressed, this is definitely the world I want to be living in. My favourite part was the puppy whistling Bohemian Rhapsody and dancing an Irish jig. That will stay in my memory bank for some time:)) And dear Willy, isn't he just the best? Debi will love this. I'm still not sure why she isn't slumped on the sofa with a half bottle of gin beside her but she refuses to leave her work station! Thank you for sharing. Take care Debbie xo

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Thank you, Debbie. I liked your tribute as well. I'm with you on the bottle of gin. Perhaps we should do it for her, lol.

I actually had a lot of fun with the post. I tried to come up with some unique ideas, and I hoped someone would get the jest in it.

Thanks, my friend.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is a sweet image:"She sighed deeply and leaned her head against the stately Red Pine." I do like the animation & fantasy. I like the ending paragraphs. This is a nice tribute to Debi.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi Liz, thank you so much for your insight into the story and letting me know what you liked about it. I'm sure Debi is enjoying the reviews!!
Hugs,
Rhonda

reply by Liz O'Neill on 19-Oct-2024

my pleasure

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a great idea to make a birthday tribute from a fantasy story! Loved how you added the music as Debi often does that for her birthday tributes and she always seeks to lift others up even when she's down. Thanks for doing this, Rhonda!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi Helen,
Thank you for the review and comments!! I snooped around on the music part, lol., actually actually on all the facts. Debi does deserve tributes!
I started to include a Greek God, but even I'm a bit tired of them, lol.

Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the collection of songs Rhonda, this is a very comforting tribute to a very worthwhile and beautiful lady whose presence on fanstory has bee an extreme blessing indeed, although I have seen a work from her this morning, beautifully written dear Rhonda, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi Roy,
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the music. I did try and emulate her style somewhat, lol. I was going to write a poem, but this is what leaked out.
Take care,
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 20-Oct-2024

Excellent job

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I'm sorry that I didn't have a six for this one. A lovely poetic/prose birthday tribute to a fan. I enjoyed the media that you used to complement your work. Don

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Hi Don, don't worry about the six. They evaporate pretty quickly around here!! I'll take a virtual one anytime!!

I'm glad you like the media. I have way too much fun with it!!