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My Aboriginal Grandmother

Grandpa married her.

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Comment from Begin Again
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What a sad and horrific story about a very brave and loving woman. Regardless of the abuse and shame placed upon her, she never forgot where she game from or who her family was. She remained strong and I must believe that her reward came to her in the end. Great story.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Hi Carol, In those days the blacks were servants. He only married her to keep her in tow. Most free tribes go 'walkabout' she just had to fit in. Thank you. Kace xx I have known a famous tennis player (Evonne Goolagong) walked out on a match. It's in our blood.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I'm glad you wrote this poetic tribute to your grandmother, recognizing the difficult life she lived and the horrible way in which she died. Now, people from Australia, the UK, and the US will know her story.

Your contest entry is well written and interesting. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Thanks little butterfly. Yes, she suffered in silence. He was a bastard. Didn't recognise us kids, never spoke to us right up to the day he died. Love, Kace xx
Comment from royowen
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I'm sorry about that, many are bad, or at least a lot, men can be users, they even don't treat white women well, God will judge them in the end, There is where we will find justice in the end Kay, a super post my friend, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Back in those days, black women were used. The white man looked on them as servants. He would sit at the table for lunch with a Bible and a cat 0' nine tails. I never understood him and never wanted to.
    Thanks for reading my friend. Blessings, K xx
reply by royowen on 20-Oct-2024
    That's wicked
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
    God sees everything and we know he won't get away with his nastiness. K xx
reply by royowen on 20-Oct-2024
    Thats true Kay
Comment from patcelaw
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This is your very real Brit poem in this style of a story and I enjoyed very much reading it. It is sad that that happened with your grandmother and that she would wind up bleeding to death on the floor. What an awful thing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Hello Patricia, Hope you are feeling better now. Nana was in bed when she bled to death. All because Grandpa refused a doctor. My sister and I fronted him to get help. That was brave of us because I was only 13. He finally called the doctor, it was too late. I loved Nan so much. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Wendy G
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Such a sad story, that he treated her so poorly. Did he not expect that their children would not be white, as she was Aboriginal? He had no real understanding of her emotional needs, it would seem, as he took away from her tribal area and family and subjected her to the ways of white people, so very different from her own. Well said. Hope you do well in the contest. I am glad you respect and honour her memory.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Well, my sister was very dark and I am a caramel colour. I'm only 1/4 black. He was a bastard. treated her like dirt and didn't speak to us at all. God doesn't miss anything. Thanks Wendy xx
Comment from Sanku
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That was a touching story .thank you for sharing it .I can see that yoj have great memories of your Nana it is very sad that she had to bleed to death

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Thanks for reading Sanku. She is in heaven now and I love her so much. K xx
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing this personal story. I'm so sad for your grandmother but I sense her smiling that you remember her and introduced all of us to her story in this rhyming poem. Hope this does well in the contest!

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Bless you Lena. Nana is always with me. Love, Kace.