Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Spirited Justice - THE END"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
So, Garth goes to Germany. I can't wait to see what happens there.
Donatelli laughed, "That's what he calls cooling off -- breaking someone." (laughed.)
Henry looked down at his hands, shaking his head. (Henry studied his hands. Is a lot stronger statement.)
Garth chuckled, "I make no promises, but I'll try to keep it civil." (chuckled.)
To what do I owe this--an unannounced visit?" ("To)
His voice was low, almost a whisper. "Dance with me?" (whisper,)
I know, but she's always with you, Garth." Eleanor patted his chest. "She's always in your heart." ("I)
e stared at the sky for a few more moments and whispered "I love you" to his angel in the sky, and then dialed Tango's number. (whispered,)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So, Garth goes to Germany. I can't wait to see what happens there.
Donatelli laughed, "That's what he calls cooling off -- breaking someone." (laughed.)
Henry looked down at his hands, shaking his head. (Henry studied his hands. Is a lot stronger statement.)
Garth chuckled, "I make no promises, but I'll try to keep it civil." (chuckled.)
To what do I owe this--an unannounced visit?" ("To)
His voice was low, almost a whisper. "Dance with me?" (whisper,)
I know, but she's always with you, Garth." Eleanor patted his chest. "She's always in your heart." ("I)
e stared at the sky for a few more moments and whispered "I love you" to his angel in the sky, and then dialed Tango's number. (whispered,)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks for taking your time to collect the periods and commas for me. I have made the corrections. Sorry if the ending chapter was a let down for you. Hopefully, when we get to the next book you will enjoy it more. Appreciate your time and effort.
Smiles, Carol
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I figured there would be another chapter because we haven't captured William yet.
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William won't be captured....he has slipped away for now. Some times the bad guys out smart the good guys ....even Garth. LOL
Comment from Wendy G
Like the touch of the fireworks and Donatelli and Jenna being to gether, as well as Naomi and Angelo. Garth needs not only to now catch Wlliam but needs a new love interest - not to replace Allie, but, as you say, to add another layer of love. Congratulations on another book completed.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Like the touch of the fireworks and Donatelli and Jenna being to gether, as well as Naomi and Angelo. Garth needs not only to now catch Wlliam but needs a new love interest - not to replace Allie, but, as you say, to add another layer of love. Congratulations on another book completed.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Wendy. I am thrilled that you have read the entire book and enjoyed it. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on finishing another book, Carol! And you brought out all your endearing characters. Finally, Donatelli has moved on. Naomi has Angelo. And Garth has a villain to catch with Eleanor always nearby to call.
I was surprised that Garth thanked Danni for the coffee in the investigation room. Was she visible? If so, Bryce and Henry should have been much more frightened!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Congratulations on finishing another book, Carol! And you brought out all your endearing characters. Finally, Donatelli has moved on. Naomi has Angelo. And Garth has a villain to catch with Eleanor always nearby to call.
I was surprised that Garth thanked Danni for the coffee in the investigation room. Was she visible? If so, Bryce and Henry should have been much more frightened!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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First of all, thank you for reading, enjoying, and blessing me with your stars. I am beyond thrilled that yu enjoyed it. And thank you for catching that oops with Danni. You were so right! I scratched it from the scene.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I'll be honest with you, Carol, I didn't feel the length of it at all. In fact, I wanted it to keep going.
Oh, so romantic, my friend!!! Fireworks going off to boot!!
But, back to the early part of the chapter. The interrogation scene was great. Henry and Bryce were putty in Garth's hands. He got what he wanted, but no so much at the German Consulate. Still, he has a lead on William. The book ends, but the story continues in Germany. I wonder if Ghosts can travel on planes??
Great job, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I'll be honest with you, Carol, I didn't feel the length of it at all. In fact, I wanted it to keep going.
Oh, so romantic, my friend!!! Fireworks going off to boot!!
But, back to the early part of the chapter. The interrogation scene was great. Henry and Bryce were putty in Garth's hands. He got what he wanted, but no so much at the German Consulate. Still, he has a lead on William. The book ends, but the story continues in Germany. I wonder if Ghosts can travel on planes??
Great job, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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My ghosts can transport anywhere... Eleanor flits betwee here and England all the time. LOL Besides, who would even dream of stopping sweet Eleanor? Thanks so much for reading and enjoying the story. And gracing me with the six stars is beyond awesome.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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Too true!! They will probably put her in first class, hehe.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I'm embarrassed to say I never got caught back up with this story but I wanted to pop in an say congratulations on reaching the end! Will there be more stories about the ghost detective in the future? great job, Carol!
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I'm embarrassed to say I never got caught back up with this story but I wanted to pop in an say congratulations on reaching the end! Will there be more stories about the ghost detective in the future? great job, Carol!
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. I so appreciate the thoughts. Yes, there will be another in the series but not for a few weeks. I'll write something else and then start again. Maybe you will catch that one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from phoegon
Even as a reader coming in late to the game for this story, My attention was kept throughout it all, and I didn't question who was talking. I can see why you are the number 1 novelist. Great work, and thank you for the share. I'll be sure to reflect on your work so I can improve my craft as well.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Even as a reader coming in late to the game for this story, My attention was kept throughout it all, and I didn't question who was talking. I can see why you are the number 1 novelist. Great work, and thank you for the share. I'll be sure to reflect on your work so I can improve my craft as well.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hello! I thank you for stopping to reach the ending of my novel. It's tough to jump in at the end but I hope you enjoyed what you read. A third in the series will begin in November and maybe you'll join me again then. I appreciate your thoughts and comments. thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol