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No One Came

a 5-7-5

13 total reviews 
Comment from TPAC
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People do age, making it hard to connect to other concerns of interests. I haven't been at a grave site in years. I haven't forgotten those who rest there. Not believing they are confined to their given plots.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
    A place for folks to meet.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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a short and moving poem about honoring the veterans who gave their lives for us all. as the husband of a veteran I can relate to this poem expressed in a few short words.

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Jake
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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This is a well written but sad reminder of how society moves on and does not always remember those left behind. Well conceived piece. It is a fresh reminder.

Robert

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Robert
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 11-Oct-2024
    You're welcome.